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GoldmemberLv55yr
2019-07-24 23:08

Ignoring the derogatory remarks that the author randomly throws at women for no reason, this novel deserves a rating of 1 purely for the fact that, in spite of this being a sci fi novel in a very futuristic setting, this author has no f'in clue what the fork a galaxy is. Yes, you read that right. This author doesn't know what a galaxy is. As for the rest: - Translation is full of mistaken identities(wrong names in places) - Everything in this novel is vague af, no details about anything relevant whatsoever - No world building whatsoever. Don't even know what year this novel takes place in. - Passing of time is dumb af. Sometimes between 2 sentences weeks pass without an indication of it whatsoever. - Author has successfully insulted just about every demographic other than "Asian". As the author nicely put it - "Asia is the birthplace of human civilization." - lul k, among other derogatory statements. - PLAGIARISM - this author literally took Eminem's "Not Afraid" and some other songs and presented them as works of his characters. - An insane number of contradictory statements made by the author. Won't go into details, but just know that anything said in regards to "world building" and "story development", other than random insults to women made by the author, are fiction open to be changed in the next sentence, paragraph or chapter at the authors whim. - The entire virtual game industry in this novel makes no f'in sense. + Lots of characters actually have their own personalities. The arrogant young masters are extremely minor in this novel. All in all this novel is the biggest garbage I've ever read, and I've read up to chapter 157 - not going further, I regret everything. Don't waste your ss on this trash.

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i wished i saw your comment before i read this garbage up to chapter 203. I didn't expect racism to pop out. I really do regret wasting my time with this crap.

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