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Yamen_Sabry
Yamen_SabryLv45yr
2019-03-30 07:03

This is the definition of bad writing!! it would be really challenging to find a worse writer .. 1. The plot is full of contradictions. 2.The fights sequences are very confusing and hard to imagine because the description is SH*T. 3. The story keeps focusing on irrelevant details but when something important comes up it's only mentioned in half a sentence that is very ambiguous and open to interpretation, not in a mysterious way but in a *i don't know where the story is going so let's leave it open* way. 4. So many illogical things to even count. For this novel to have 4/5 stars is beyond unreasonable, are you ppl fuking high!!! This is not just a bad novel, it made me passionately hate the writer!! it's not even about taste ... this is just SH*T!

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xcrusnik07x
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You sir just saved me 10 min of writing an angry review if only i could get back the time spent on this novel. . .

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