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Dugdimadome
DugdimadomeLv56yr
2018-09-23 13:12

So if you hate stories that end prematurely and very unsatisfying-ly, you should end now, without going into to much detail, numerous significant events are never resolved or explained, and the ending is basically wang zheng going on a 3 year time skip where he's super op but it's not even explained, him and aina get married, there's an impending zerg war, no harem, and it just ends. everything gets wrapped up in 3 chapters and it's extremely unsatisfying, right next to the ending of the strongest system in my **** list, a good read throughout, but you get to the last 3 chapters and it's just... like what did i just read hundreds of chapters for? just wanna save some other people the potential time.

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MacBentley
MacBentleyLv5

Lol chapter 335 is the ending? I thought it was chapter 1000+ 🤔👀

Dugdimadome
DugdimadomeLv5

Its called reading other translation sources? Are you stupid or just ignorant.

MacBentley:Lol chapter 335 is the ending? I thought it was chapter 1000+ 🤔👀
MacBentley
MacBentleyLv5

Look, never read the book. Just from reading other people’s reviews made me uninterested. I just thought that when translations stopped(what I read in one of the reviews) you thought it was the ending. Haha, well I also thought you were reading another website to continue reading when I sent the reply, but I was too lazy to delete it and didn’t thought you would bother replying xD

Dugdimadome:Its called reading other translation sources? Are you stupid or just ignorant.
Dugdimadome
DugdimadomeLv5

nah i read it all the way through. quite pissed at myself for doing so. the author now writes LoL fan fiction, so that should say enough about this.

MacBentley:Look, never read the book. Just from reading other people’s reviews made me uninterested. I just thought that when translations stopped(what I read in one of the reviews) you thought it was the ending. Haha, well I also thought you were reading another website to continue reading when I sent the reply, but I was too lazy to delete it and didn’t thought you would bother replying xD
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Goldmember
GoldmemberLv5

Ignoring the derogatory remarks that the author randomly throws at women for no reason, this novel deserves a rating of 1 purely for the fact that, in spite of this being a sci fi novel in a very futuristic setting, this author has no f'in clue what the fork a galaxy is. Yes, you read that right. This author doesn't know what a galaxy is. As for the rest: - Translation is full of mistaken identities(wrong names in places) - Everything in this novel is vague af, no details about anything relevant whatsoever - No world building whatsoever. Don't even know what year this novel takes place in. - Passing of time is dumb af. Sometimes between 2 sentences weeks pass without an indication of it whatsoever. - Author has successfully insulted just about every demographic other than "Asian". As the author nicely put it - "Asia is the birthplace of human civilization." - lul k, among other derogatory statements. - PLAGIARISM - this author literally took Eminem's "Not Afraid" and some other songs and presented them as works of his characters. - An insane number of contradictory statements made by the author. Won't go into details, but just know that anything said in regards to "world building" and "story development", other than random insults to women made by the author, are fiction open to be changed in the next sentence, paragraph or chapter at the authors whim. - The entire virtual game industry in this novel makes no f'in sense. + Lots of characters actually have their own personalities. The arrogant young masters are extremely minor in this novel. All in all this novel is the biggest garbage I've ever read, and I've read up to chapter 157 - not going further, I regret everything. Don't waste your ss on this trash.

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