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Dugdimadome
DugdimadomeLv56yr
2018-09-23 13:12

So if you hate stories that end prematurely and very unsatisfying-ly, you should end now, without going into to much detail, numerous significant events are never resolved or explained, and the ending is basically wang zheng going on a 3 year time skip where he's super op but it's not even explained, him and aina get married, there's an impending zerg war, no harem, and it just ends. everything gets wrapped up in 3 chapters and it's extremely unsatisfying, right next to the ending of the strongest system in my **** list, a good read throughout, but you get to the last 3 chapters and it's just... like what did i just read hundreds of chapters for? just wanna save some other people the potential time.

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MacBentley
MacBentleyLv5

Lol chapter 335 is the ending? I thought it was chapter 1000+ 🤔👀

Dugdimadome
DugdimadomeLv5

Its called reading other translation sources? Are you stupid or just ignorant.

MacBentley:Lol chapter 335 is the ending? I thought it was chapter 1000+ 🤔👀
MacBentley
MacBentleyLv5

Look, never read the book. Just from reading other people’s reviews made me uninterested. I just thought that when translations stopped(what I read in one of the reviews) you thought it was the ending. Haha, well I also thought you were reading another website to continue reading when I sent the reply, but I was too lazy to delete it and didn’t thought you would bother replying xD

Dugdimadome:Its called reading other translation sources? Are you stupid or just ignorant.
Dugdimadome
DugdimadomeLv5

nah i read it all the way through. quite pissed at myself for doing so. the author now writes LoL fan fiction, so that should say enough about this.

MacBentley:Look, never read the book. Just from reading other people’s reviews made me uninterested. I just thought that when translations stopped(what I read in one of the reviews) you thought it was the ending. Haha, well I also thought you were reading another website to continue reading when I sent the reply, but I was too lazy to delete it and didn’t thought you would bother replying xD
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