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2018-02-16 15:23

What should I say? I want to give this novel the lowest possible score if not for me considering the hardwork of the translator. First of all, this novel has good world background and story development because the author just copies and steals other people's ideas. The author tried to copy multiple ideas and compile it as his own, but failed miserably. Most of what made up this story are stolen from Fallout series' lore, example of which are the deathclaws, mutated humans researched by the government, the project of eden, the fallout vaults, and most of the lore of fallout but the author just patched fallout's lore with other stories' ideas to fit his narrative. Because the author is lacking of imagination or is lazy, he even stole ideas from conspiracy stories, and went as far as using other people's name; Is it that fucking hard to think of a name? To top it all off, the b*tch of an author is a racist himself, what a f*cktard. Yes I am biased because the author ruined the fucking story by adding his racist ideas. I repeat, the premise of this novel is good because it is ripped off of other people's intellectual property, and as far as I know the author seems to not even give credits to where he got those ideas from.

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This novels main theme is kingdom building and world domination with a cheat and advanced technology. Everything else is irrelevant and just adds more flavor. For every person like you who doesn't like and doesn't care about the premise itself yhere will be at least 1 person with opposite tastes. That's why moralfag tyranny is inherently failure idea.

Joshkam
JoshkamLv5

Say that again the main character raped someone

ArtistaFeel
ArtistaFeelLv4

wanna try something new? try this "Lyricist: Her Revenge" I'm sure you'll love it

Hirak_Barua
Hirak_BaruaLv15

My top 3 story dude, guess it's just not your cup of tea. I will give this story 4.5 out of 5.

Wixar
WixarLv12

This one is my first love. The background and characters are what gave me a gender for the other books I read. Too bad you don't share my taste. And for the conspiracy theoris thing, those are all over the internet, you can't say they where stolen.

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