n7harry

awesome!

this time he trusted from behind

so lin yuan distracted his enemy by saying, Chotto matte!

shadow flash? is it from the loot? soon he needs to swag and sing can't touch this while getting ambushed!

ooh giant fireball skill!

big bada boom!

lmao, this lazy snake is gonna be a jormungadr.

I already finished it, so far no complaints. the plot is slightly rushed, but then again kael is supposed to be lonely and hungry for social interactions. so far, it's only about 2 characters other than kael. And it needs to be bigger.... in a lot of aspects, dungeon upgrades, puzzles. Also it's a generic dungeon so far, people cones to kill monsters and get treasures, that's it. better to have a story on each level in future. up to you, how you should do it, maybe some dark themes, some joyful themes, some team work themed, some puzzles themed, some fun themed like fishing or sports themed, dark souls themed ( impossible to balance unless he can guarantee a few lives to to adventurers, but that denies the purpose), and hence he needs tones of energy. But the most glaring problem is Karl is really weak, he needs a lot more energy, a lot more freedom to choose how he should develop and overall spare energy to do as he pleases, he can also have fun while he is at it. For a dungeon that has so many levels, he sure goes to sleep just by doing a few random stuff.