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MytthywLv107yr
2017-12-30 20:42

I stopped reading very recently and I will tell you why The story has no purpose Now hold on a minute. Stay with me. Originally the Mc gets sent back in time after a fight with the man who stole his soon to be wife. This creates motivation for the Mc to make money to become rich in order to have the qualifications to marry this girl so much. But what's that 2 busty chicks with 0 character development come around and BAM the Mc has second thoughts about the girl he was in love with. So what comes next... what's the new motivation. What does the Mc strive for. The thing is it's NOTHING. There is no conflict and the Mc is now stupidly overpowered that if their was any conflict even oh I don't know 40,000 players trying to kill you they still wouldn't be able to do it. Now some people say that the last point might be bs because he has the 200,000 back up NPCs and the forbidden scroll but you need to remember that nobody was able to do pretty much anything in smh to him at all coupled with his -S class inheritance allowing him to wield a 2 handed weapon -his battle companion who is hinted at being the GODDESS OF WAR's SISTER [who could easily distory a lvl 150 ETHERAL FEILD BOSS dragon] -his life saving skills such as making himself go into another dimension -oh and not to mention if that all fails he can just teleport his party in who will have 2 more S class inheritance -on this the Mc says that it was rare for a REIGION to have one of these in his past life yet now on his team his 2 herem girls whos personalities are at best considered stereotypes -don't forget one of his other party members will now get himself a dragon -coupled with the fact that he can summon a pet meaning he to will probably get a dragon cause why not -he is a tank with the strength of a DPS class. This might not seem like much but it makes the Mc so stupidly overpowered the fact that no one can kill him. - he can do dmg to people almost 1 shoting them while they are powerless to do a damn thing to stop him even professionals , just look I the recent chapters of the teams from India and Europe, powerless, NOTHING they can do So what's his motivation. What's his goal now. He is the most overpowered person in the game. And frankly NOTHING goes wrong and he winds up getting everything he needs automatically -example the first main story quest -the unicorn horn -the black dragon heart - why? Cause why not There really is no point in reading it unless your looking forward to the chapters where there is a world war but with his guild having 3 S class inheritance when just 1 can turn the tide in a battle there really is no point in reading the book If you feel as though I mis-categorized something please point it out so I can clarify. I will not insult you as everyone has their own opinions End of my rant Have a nice day

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MytthywLv10

couple of spelling errors smh is suppose to be dmg

windpeiLv4

I think the mc is just bring realistic , let me ask you, if you are back to the past time, will you built another motivation if the things goes differently ? I will. Besides, the mc is not a saint from the 1st chapter

MytthywLv10

It's not a matter of the MC because I actually liked his personality some what. It's a matter of the author and the challenges he throws at the MC and how he made him OP which ruined any potential development in the story. It's was a nice read early on when everything was new but now it's no fun reading about an unkillable character go through challenges because you know they will always win. Although that's just my opinion.

windpei:I think the mc is just bring realistic , let me ask you, if you are back to the past time, will you built another motivation if the things goes differently ? I will. Besides, the mc is not a saint from the 1st chapter
windpeiLv4

Hahaha almost in every near ending story , they always be too much OP and unkillable.. Indicating the story will soon ending hahhaa

Mytthyw:It's not a matter of the MC because I actually liked his personality some what. It's a matter of the author and the challenges he throws at the MC and how he made him OP which ruined any potential development in the story. It's was a nice read early on when everything was new but now it's no fun reading about an unkillable character go through challenges because you know they will always win. Although that's just my opinion.
MytthywLv10

I stopped reading at around 570 so I wasnt sure how long it was going to go for plus I'm talking about the previous story narrative

windpei:Hahaha almost in every near ending story , they always be too much OP and unkillable.. Indicating the story will soon ending hahhaa
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PkbwgscLv4

It's interesting, sure, but the characters are flat. The author seems to think that humor or camadre comes from random snippets of party members shouting insults at each other or random nonsensical banter. Consistency was an issue early - either the author or translator did not properly proofread, since repetition of information seems to be contradictory: the AOE sweep skill that was supposed to have gone from 100-200% damage because the MC did a certain quest perfectly is displayed as 200% both times in the story, despite the first instance being supposedly 100. Several other, smaller inconsistencies in dialogue also pop up. The number scaling is also ridiculous - supposedly the number of players in the very beginning were 4 million simultaneously with over a billion after 5 years.... And the 'guy whose uncle works at the company' states that the VR helmets for the game sold 500 million of its stock preorder... Supposing that a super advanced VR helmet that connects to neural pathways was priced CHEAPER than today's high resolution monitor helmets at 500 dollars, and that millions of individual people could afford such a luxury and were willing to pay for it, the company would have just made 250 billion dollars of revenue. In preorders. However, if you can retain your suspension of disbelief then it's entertaining. At least until you get past the first 2 dungeons. The damage scaling doesn't change at all. The MC at level 16 can do 400 damage with his 'super op' aoe ability. Then later after more than tripling his weapons attack and getting a flat 50% armor penetration ability it does 700 damage to regular mobs. Then, despite the MC's perfect knowledge of the boss attack patterns and having party members that are described as being extremely good, being potentially pro level after improving some mechanical skills, they get wiped several times. From dumb mistakes. Overall, not bad. Honestly? Not worth being nearly as highly rated or popular. It has many, many flaws that can be easy to overlook, so might make for a decent read.

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