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Andeetected
AndeetectedLv117yr
2018-01-27 21:56

Currently at chapter 632. Story has no substance. There's no real goal, it feels like the author doesn't know which way he's heading. Too many Arcs with no real plot. Basically, there's no momentum at all. No excitement. The villains get killed with no real satisfaction because...again, no momentum. Even the romance has no substance. The harem has no glue. All the side characters doesn't leave you with any impression at all. If i have to describe this in one word: Bland.

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DaoistThreeFingers
DaoistThreeFingersLv6

Its one of those novels you follow just for the sake of having something to read while waiting for the ones you really like. The story is not that grandoise but it has its moment but those are really scarce after 600 chapters. Same stuff happens when mc meet new female harem members which gets a little boring. Theres only three stuff that happens in this novel. Secret area openings, old people hunting him down because theyre of him in the future and females who want to kill him dont die.

N0xiety
N0xietyLv7

Can't agree more. Also, author just keeps destroying or changing the characters personality to fit his immediate nerrative. They flip around all the time including mc. Author also destroys his worlds rules all the time. He sets a rule, then comes a person who not only break those previously set rules, he practically sh*ts on them. This novel is indeed very bland and quite honestly really annoying to read...

Afternoone
AfternooneLv14

Currently at chapter 467. I am already feeling bored at chapter 400++... got no motivation to read on. I came here due to 5 star reviews. Is this novel really good or is it just me?

N0xiety
N0xietyLv7

Haha have you seen the translator Sigma himself posting 5 star spam reviews? There are like 50 reviews just from Sigma at page 23 to 24! Other peoples reviews aren't much different either... Reviews are a goddamn joke...

Afternoone:Currently at chapter 467. I am already feeling bored at chapter 400++... got no motivation to read on. I came here due to 5 star reviews. Is this novel really good or is it just me?
NgeSu
NgeSuLv5

I am currently at 200 at same **** the mc is not getting stronger and not rulthless anymore author is making the novel go real bad he is not overpower anymore ****kkkk

Els_Word
Els_WordLv14

He is very much op. After 900 it gets betr.

ERFAN_SAM
ERFAN_SAMLv5

Man If You Read Novels Like This About Traveling To Outer Worlds You Understand That the Story Reveal the Real Goal Normally around Chapter 800to1000

JobMcwatch
JobMcwatchLv2

If you dont have patience. Just dont start reading it, or just drop it.

Andeetected
AndeetectedLv11

Umm...632 chapters means no patience? Also, this was not a complaint. This was a personal REVIEW done six months ago. Your statement is irrelevant.

JobMcwatch:If you dont have patience. Just dont start reading it, or just drop it.
SonataL
SonataLLv5

A novel shouldn't take 900 chapters to get you to start thinking that it's a good novel.

Els_Word:He is very much op. After 900 it gets betr.
JadeMonkey
JadeMonkeyLv14

There’s like over 100+ chapters worth of straight up premium locked chapters. And every chapter is like 10 spirit stones. Waaaay to greedy on their part.

Ahrat
AhratLv4

there are limits of what patience means. if you have to read 1000 chapters before the novel becomes sth decent you need to set your priorities back to normal bro. GoS was decent at the start but later he became some passive ***** where everyone is using him and manipulating like hes some retard, which he becomes. wheres his life ideals and all that extra crap? he would never show mercy to his enemies especially women since hes perverted af but naah... not to mention they have their strenght sealed and he talks about doing stuff yet still saving them at the end.. trash novel with the typical author cheap writing where he degeneratss the novel and adjust to his weak and pathetic writing at get-go so this Scrabble of story could follow somewhere, yet still being mediocre at best moments trough the novel.

JobMcwatch:If you dont have patience. Just dont start reading it, or just drop it.
geot5
geot5Lv5

xp

geot5
geot5Lv5

xp

shamelesss
shamelesssLv14

gg

TrashHeap
TrashHeapLv11

Exactly. Nobody wants to spend a week of their free time to only end up with disappointment.

SonataL:A novel shouldn't take 900 chapters to get you to start thinking that it's a good novel.
luff_doido
luff_doidoLv2

xp

Veasna_TDM
Veasna_TDMLv11

I hate the momentum though, it just a stretch for more work count, and it make reader continue to read for then usual and most of the time it is anticlimactic. Building the hype so high only to have the usual Xianxia ending. but I guess if you are looking for the same thing to read then ok.

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Milkshake
MilkshakeLv5

[Translation Quality] 4/5 a. First thing, MTL vs TL. Even though I am not a Chinese speaker, i have consulted with someone who is (credits to Weirdo) and the latest chapter indicates a proper translation by Chinese speakers and not a machine translation. The TL is coherent enough albeit he didn't like how the "Demonic Sound Clan" was TL-ed among a few trivialities. So whatever the past teams did or whatever the past staff of this translation brand did, the current staff are not MTL-ing. I would suggest to the new staff to make TL notes on character names, faction names, chinese characters and their explanations on why they were translated that way and other possible translations, and indent that stuff at the end of chapters as it would showcase that they actually think about this and give the users some peace over how they treat this work in terms of translation. b. Naming Standardization. I haven't re-read the whole novel, so i don't know what the current state of the past chapters is. Naming standardization was not bad. The only thing i could complain about in the past was that the editors couldn't agree upon the name writing styles (combined or separated). Examples (each line is one character's name): - YaJi / Ya Ji - Cao Zhilan / Cao Zhi Lan - He Qingman / He Qing Man I don't know how things are now, so take this as a grain of salt, or the staff can take it as a suggestion to edit if they missed some character names so users can find it easier to google search characters to brush up on their past appearances and involved events. A poll on whether separated or combined are more memorable or not would be good, as user input is important and a poll can be indented at the end of a chapter like TL notes. I suggest the staff use polls from time to time since user-staff interaction is bad on this site, or at least indent a Discord channel or some chat channel or something where the staff can be reached instead of e-mail, as it is more interactive in regards to user feedback on grammar and spelling and other. c. Grammar was sometimes great and sometimes horrible in the past. Again, i don't know how things changed in this regard now when it comes to past chapters. The new chapters were very readable with a few spelling or grammar mistakes. After copy-pasting Chapter 299 into notepad++, i instantly found about 4 or 5 legitimate spelling mistakes by scrolling through it and observing what words were underlined, with 2 or 3 false positives, and it took me 30 or so seconds to do this. [World] The world is rich and vast, with cultivation and laws sculpting some places geographically and climatically. I would suggest to the users to write a glossary of places and factions and their descriptions as they may need it. ======================= ===SOME SPOILERS BELOW==== ======================= [Cultivation & Martial Arts] This novel has an inheritance system for cultivation. Interesting concept which becomes less and less relevant the more the story advances because the MC becomes part of a cultivation world where everyone has powers. I wish the author focused a bit more on this, but i guess it's too early for me to say anything. I would suggest to the readers to especially write the skills and descriptions of the powers that the MC gains through the story, because it will immensely help with visualizing the battles and understanding what is going on. The author didn't make it memory-friendly. The battles themselves are damn fun in my opinion though. [Story & Characters] The MC is an anti-hero. He's not as evil as Warlock of the Magus World MC, but also not nice either. If you want a novel with someone who has a moral superiority complex and a boner for justice and ethics and all that boring jazz, seek another work. The MC is selfish and cares mostly about survival and adventurism. His personality of an adrenaline junkie passed on into the new world, with his wisdom and intelligence rising as he goes through the story and has new experiences, but his soul remaining the same. You can regard him as a vagabond who only stays in places if they provide power. He is not a hypocrite and admits on doing things on his whim. He is also lecherous, which comes with an "i can die any day, so i might as well" attitude as well as his way of steaming-off from his adrenaline and/or special cultivation technique. The work is NSFW, so all easily triggered and frustrated feminists, conservative religious soccer mommies, and sexual moralists in general, seek another work instead of producing farts in the comments that only serve to stink up the room and achieve nothing beyond that. The characters are varied, even among the powerful ones, and apart from the cliche like arrogant seniors you also have seniors who step back and think before building enmity with the MC. Some characters are forgotten, some characters come back to have interesting interactions, so i can't say there's nothing to lose in memorizing characters. Write a glossary as you read. Side-character focused scenes don't take too much of the reader's time most of the times as they usually take up a quarter or third of a chapter when they happen; but they all have a purpose and aren't exactly fillers. The story itself isn't bad in terms of development speed; it's among the average level leaning slightly towards fast. ========= To the staff i would suggest: Make a glossary page for the readers. Make it in chronological order of introduction and emphasize it as that because this is a good spoiler-countermeasure as readers then know up to which line to check the glossary. It is not only for the good of the users, but also for the good of the staff in regards to naming standardization.

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