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sm25265
sm25265Lv47yr
2017-09-29 01:07

I almost didn't start reading this novel because of all the negative comments about the quality of the translations. I'm glad I started though. In my opinion there are some spelling errors, typing errors and grammar mistakes at times but it's nowhere as bad as all the comments indicate. Well, let me put it this way: the quality of translation absolutely does NOT affect my joy of reading, I get so engaged in the story that I don't even make note of the mistakes oftentimes. I don't know if the earlier chapters later on had been fixed and updated but what I can tell you now, that if you are interested in the plot, go ahead and read it, it is really a good read. So, thank you translators for your hard work. Also, please increase chapter upload per week, because I'm about to catch up and worried that because of the long wait, I'll loose interest in this novel in future, like so it happened with a few others.

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Gea
GeaLv5

Estoy de acuerdo contigo yo también quiero que aumenten los capitulos

ChocoLatte
ChocoLatteLv13

Welp. Your comment helps a lot. Due to the reviews regarding translation made me not want to read it. Until I read this review. (: Thank you

Maddog
MaddogLv5

I agree with you, I read the review and almost just skip over GOS, but when I read the book there was barely anything like what the review said.

sm25265
sm25265Lv4

Glad I could help. I really wanted people to not be put off from reading the book because of all the false comment. 😉

ChocoLatte:Welp. Your comment helps a lot. Due to the reviews regarding translation made me not want to read it. Until I read this review. (: Thank you
sm25265
sm25265Lv4

Indeed. Makes me feel like some of those comments could be lies. Almost as if written with the purpose of sabotaging this work...

Maddog:I agree with you, I read the review and almost just skip over GOS, but when I read the book there was barely anything like what the review said.
sm25265
sm25265Lv4

Con suerte, la velocidad del lanzamiento del capítulo aumentará a medida que más personas comiencen a leer el libro.

Gea:Estoy de acuerdo contigo yo también quiero que aumenten los capitulos
Silver_Moon789
Silver_Moon789Lv4

Thank you, you're the first person I've found on the reviews that isn't complaining about the translation and actually commented on the actual story.

sm25265
sm25265Lv4

You are welcome. I felt I just had to share my thoughts about the story with you all so that those interested in the plot won't miss out on this good read.

Silver_Moon789:Thank you, you're the first person I've found on the reviews that isn't complaining about the translation and actually commented on the actual story.
Ranos
RanosLv13

Well all those comments seem to be from 5 months ago so perhaps someone went back and did a little touchup?

sm25265
sm25265Lv4

I thought of that as a possibility but I found no indication that any sort of update work had been done on the chapters. The translators didn't mention it and no readers brought up this point either. So I'm really not sure what had happened and the reason for those negative comments about the transitions. Anyways, I tried to clarify things by sharing my view on this story and hope that now more people would give the novel a try and become fans like me.

Ranos:Well all those comments seem to be from 5 months ago so perhaps someone went back and did a little touchup?
Satur1976
Satur1976Lv6

Nice

sm25265
sm25265Lv4

😁😉

Satur1976:Nice
_YumeNoKami_
_YumeNoKami_Lv11

Thank you.

sm25265
sm25265Lv4

Happy to help ☺️

_YumeNoKami_:Thank you.
evilmonarch
evilmonarchLv4

Yeah you're review helps alot but why was it that most readers make the reviews for the story as a basis if it was good? I don't get it. You're own your own and it's up to u to judge it after reading a few chapters. Does all those bull**** needed to make a judgment?

sm25265
sm25265Lv4

Hi there. Sorry I’m not sure if I follow exactly what you mean. If you would like me to comment on what you were intending to tell me/us, would you please explain again? Thanks

evilmonarch:Yeah you're review helps alot but why was it that most readers make the reviews for the story as a basis if it was good? I don't get it. You're own your own and it's up to u to judge it after reading a few chapters. Does all those bull**** needed to make a judgment?
evilmonarch
evilmonarchLv4

U don't have to read the remaining after 5 words....

sm25265:Hi there. Sorry I’m not sure if I follow exactly what you mean. If you would like me to comment on what you were intending to tell me/us, would you please explain again? Thanks
sm25265
sm25265Lv4

Haha ok 😁

evilmonarch:U don't have to read the remaining after 5 words....
eggnog
eggnogLv10

Its not the best quality translation. Many names gets jumbled up from time to time but it really wouldnt be that bad. You can still understand what is happening and that is good enough for me

Barbatos26
Barbatos26Lv5

Ok,i'll give this a shot then😀👍 Thanks

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Milkshake
MilkshakeLv5

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I haven't re-read the whole novel, so i don't know what the current state of the past chapters is. Naming standardization was not bad. The only thing i could complain about in the past was that the editors couldn't agree upon the name writing styles (combined or separated). Examples (each line is one character's name): - YaJi / Ya Ji - Cao Zhilan / Cao Zhi Lan - He Qingman / He Qing Man I don't know how things are now, so take this as a grain of salt, or the staff can take it as a suggestion to edit if they missed some character names so users can find it easier to google search characters to brush up on their past appearances and involved events. A poll on whether separated or combined are more memorable or not would be good, as user input is important and a poll can be indented at the end of a chapter like TL notes. I suggest the staff use polls from time to time since user-staff interaction is bad on this site, or at least indent a Discord channel or some chat channel or something where the staff can be reached instead of e-mail, as it is more interactive in regards to user feedback on grammar and spelling and other. c. Grammar was sometimes great and sometimes horrible in the past. Again, i don't know how things changed in this regard now when it comes to past chapters. The new chapters were very readable with a few spelling or grammar mistakes. After copy-pasting Chapter 299 into notepad++, i instantly found about 4 or 5 legitimate spelling mistakes by scrolling through it and observing what words were underlined, with 2 or 3 false positives, and it took me 30 or so seconds to do this. [World] The world is rich and vast, with cultivation and laws sculpting some places geographically and climatically. 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If you want a novel with someone who has a moral superiority complex and a boner for justice and ethics and all that boring jazz, seek another work. The MC is selfish and cares mostly about survival and adventurism. His personality of an adrenaline junkie passed on into the new world, with his wisdom and intelligence rising as he goes through the story and has new experiences, but his soul remaining the same. You can regard him as a vagabond who only stays in places if they provide power. He is not a hypocrite and admits on doing things on his whim. He is also lecherous, which comes with an "i can die any day, so i might as well" attitude as well as his way of steaming-off from his adrenaline and/or special cultivation technique. The work is NSFW, so all easily triggered and frustrated feminists, conservative religious soccer mommies, and sexual moralists in general, seek another work instead of producing farts in the comments that only serve to stink up the room and achieve nothing beyond that. The characters are varied, even among the powerful ones, and apart from the cliche like arrogant seniors you also have seniors who step back and think before building enmity with the MC. Some characters are forgotten, some characters come back to have interesting interactions, so i can't say there's nothing to lose in memorizing characters. Write a glossary as you read. Side-character focused scenes don't take too much of the reader's time most of the times as they usually take up a quarter or third of a chapter when they happen; but they all have a purpose and aren't exactly fillers. The story itself isn't bad in terms of development speed; it's among the average level leaning slightly towards fast. ========= To the staff i would suggest: Make a glossary page for the readers. Make it in chronological order of introduction and emphasize it as that because this is a good spoiler-countermeasure as readers then know up to which line to check the glossary. It is not only for the good of the users, but also for the good of the staff in regards to naming standardization.

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