this needs more views, so many people missing out this ff😿

I my honest opinion this ff has potential to be good I've been wanting for a dothraki ff for a long time I just don't know why author's always go for targaryen's or Northerners bro it's getting annoying in my opinion change it up a bit the character doesn't has to be from a important family or background he can just be a commoner or slave now that would be interesting but anyways this ff has potential but author-San needs to slow the ff down and fleshed-out things things are moving too fast but don't get me wrong I like it but things just don't make sense to me like his endless conquering this alone should put a serious toll on his armies numbers and morale and I know he rest in between time skips but to me it didn't give that feeling when I'm reading this ff it feels like he is endlessly conquering Non-Stop idk bro this ff has potential but still needs serious work in my opinion 🤔🤷🏾‍♂️

The story is good so far but slow the story down or write some chapters (one before the wake up chapter for details on the MC and why he is how he is) and put one before the Wake up chapter then put some after to really explain how his horde grew and the struggles hes had controlling it (some of the dothraki probably tried to challenge him for the khal position) But if you dont want to do that try to mix it up a little really build up the characters and the world maybe do a little bit of kingdom building drop some flash backs of the MC and the travels hes done with the horde and then with how the story progresses show how he interacts with different people and how he thinks maybe switch the POV later down the line when the story has more chaps so the readers dont get bored but really great story so far ALSO A FEW BOOKS I RECOMMEND YOU LOOK AT ARE "The Burnt Prince-GOT SI" "Raiden's Storm (ASOIAF)" "GOT: The Golden Lion" I feel like they might be a books that can give you ideas on how to improve and make your story go smooth

Really enjoyable I personally haven't seen a Thrones fic with this premise before and I like it the mc is fun to read with his calm yet ruthless personality Plus who doesn't like good lemon's In there stories.

Really interesting take on a ASOIAF especially from a refreshing side that’s not the basic Westeros Noble set up that others tend to do.

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I would love for you to continue to write this story. I am very much invested in it right now. Hmm, I don't know what to do with myself.Please continue doing what you're doing.

You asked for reviews and here is one. Interesting story and good pacing.