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Kil0
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2024-12-11 10:44

Bruh that synopsis is a hot mess. I think your premise has potential, but you gotta work on your flow and word choice. Try reading out loud what you write

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PeterGriffith
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Good luck making this guy improve, he doesn't give a sht about improvement look at his other stories notice anything different?

Kil0
Kil0Lv4

Actually he did go back and change the summary at least

PeterGriffith:Good luck making this guy improve, he doesn't give a sht about improvement look at his other stories notice anything different?
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