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SlimeSage
SlimeSageAuthor4mth
2024-12-10 11:22

Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon? ❌ Is It Wrong to Try to Review My Own Work With Five Stars? ✅

Marvel DxD: The New Sorcerer Supreme

SlimeSage
3.7
107 Chs

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MarinXGrayfia
MarinXGrayfiaLv4

dxd mixed in and less than 2-3 girl in harem 😒

4mth
5
Basically_God
Basically_GodLv12

Unfortunately you appear to maybe getting review bombed; my guess is school is now out so a lot of barely formed frontal lobes or one really angry guy on an account.

4mth
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SlimeSage
SlimeSageAuthor

To be honest, I don’t mind the hate, they just served as a fuel for me to keep going and improve. Though I appreciate your concern and grateful for the recent review.

Basically_God:Unfortunately you appear to maybe getting review bombed; my guess is school is now out so a lot of barely formed frontal lobes or one really angry guy on an account.
4mth
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Kriti_Ttam
Kriti_TtamLv12

I really wish you create a novel where mc has world traveling system with beginner gift pack of the full power of castlevenia lord of shadows Dracula transmitted into castlevenia animated series where he gets power doing some quest alike and then travel to next worlds like anime & game worlds not like kung fu panda but more like some MMORPG famous games like dragon Raja , diablo series , assassin creed series , call of duty , high school dxd of course , akame ga kill , overload , even overgeared , world of warcraft series , tensura , danmachi etc you can even add movie worlds as well as Marvel and DC and dark universe of Dracula untold etc lot of potential to be a 1k chapters novel and I would love it because there isn't close to any of genres novel I am saying some are good but that's it but I really hope you author make long novel over 1k chapters

2mth
LukeMorningStar
LukeMorningStarLv3

Who are on harem?

2mth
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4kingschalie
4kingschalieLv3

Will he stay in the DxD verse for good?

1mth
Other Reviews
Kil0
Kil0Lv4

Bruh that synopsis is a hot mess. I think your premise has potential, but you gotta work on your flow and word choice. Try reading out loud what you write

4mth

Xilt
XiltLv3

another trash dxd ff where mc just become sl@ve to the devil. whats even the point of reading this trash any further. sl@ve MC sl@ve MC sl@ve MC sl@ve MC sl@ve MC sl@ve MC

3mth
Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

The title is quite misleading. The MC started out as a sorcerer but quickly became a Reincarnated Devil upon arriving in DxD and it's not even DxD canon but rather the past during the great war so we have an MC who isn't even a Sorcerer and a fic that doesn't actually take place in DxD.

4mth
NO_YURI_000
NO_YURI_000Lv4

Thay are complaning about MC being a slave ,, when in fact he was reincarnated by a prototype Evil pice and sarafall and ajuka thenselfs said that he has no obligation like WORKING under them = The slavery system isnt even established as that happend in or after Devil Civil War The funny thing is They think Ajuka is Batman as in always paranoyed about every.single.thing !! Ajuka is not Bruse wayn . He has frends, family, He is Read Reachard smart just not THAT reckless and NOT traumatysed psycotic Bruse wayn

3mth
DestroyingPaper
DestroyingPaperLv4

.

4mth
Skepparn
SkepparnLv14

It’s honestly insulting how he lures with the title and description but fail to deliver this badly in the story…

4mth
_Human_
_Human_Lv4

Author blue balled us if you dare to blue ball now I will curse you that you will never pop your cherry if you didn't or or.... or yes you will always be blue balled hmph .👿👿👿

4mth
Basically_God
Basically_GodLv12

This is just to inform future possible readers that the 1 star reviews you see on this novel are essentially just slander. They likely don't like some plot detail or something the author said so have decided to review bomb. People were unfairly review bombing this novel so simply I thought I'd give an actual review to actually help. First of all people are saying that the synopsis & title don't make sense... That is a rather stupid judgement as there haven't even been twenty chapters however he is planning to make a Mystic Arts faction while the synopsis has already been met. Due to the lack of chapters I didn't want to write a review as there isn't much to mention. What there is I like as the pacing is good with the characters being grabbing enough for me to sit down & read in one sitting. He is in the new world after getting backstabbed by his master by chapter 2... What doesn't make sense about that? The story is also something you can follow along with, even if it isn't your cup of tea, so hardly one star worthy. The updates appear to drop every couple days while the writing quality is such that I do not remember any mistakes nor has anyone commented on it in the reviews. As such I'll give it a pass. Either way it was clearly readable so revealing that those who gave it a complete one star are simply false reviews. Character design... So far Serafall seems fine but not much to judge it however, once again, not worth a one star by far. World background is using DxD and nothing has been ouright butchered so that is fine. If people vote 1 star on that it makes you wonder why they even bothered reading a DxD novel in the first place.

4mth
MarinXGrayfia
MarinXGrayfiaLv4

Happy for a while cuz my fav anime(dxd) mixed in but sad cuz 2-3 girls in harem. what a letdown 😒, we all know how dxd story goes. can't believe i have to say this🤦 Issei is better than author

4mth
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