Overall good read, the grammar isn’t the worse I’m there aren’t many mistakes. The concept is cool even though there are multiple fics where mc has gojo powers it still has it’s uniqueness. Added characters are cool and make the story funny(especially my boy Todo), romance so far is coming along nicely and I don’t have any major problems with it. One thing that’s worth pointing out is the inconsistency with mc power, he’s presented as a reborn assassin and then he doesn’t display any characteristics that you would expect from one. The author sometimes messes the scaling but he tries and improves it so I don’t realy have the problem. I only have one question, cause this reminds me of another fic that was removed from the app, it was about afo son(though he wasn’t presented as him there were multiple clues), he got power that allowed him to absorbe and redirect kinetic energy(I noticed similar thing in chapter when they did the first hero classes and author wrote that mc barrier absorbed energy), plus in the fic there were also au characters, todo was also presented as the mc friend, and kaori was also there and i think she was spy of afo(though one again it wasn’t said, just many clues). I can’t realy check it’s name but the author was AkiraTensei and it had nejjire on the cover. I’ll be glad if I got an answer just to satisfy my curiosity, because I don’t realy care If it was or wasn’t inspired by that fic since it’s already gone.
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