note this isn't my final review .I will chan geit as the series goes onReincarnating a Saiyan in marvel is an interesting choice, this fanfic has good potential.My fear for this fanfic is powerscaling . Ppl like to say if they were to become Saiyan they would reach the super Saiyan and become like Goku and Vegeta , completely undervaluing all the hardwork that Goku and Vegeta put in and all the ppl that helped them achieve there goals , in reality if u become a Saiyan and u didn't have anything that Goku and Vegeta had u could train for your life and only be as strong as raditz or nappa and never ever achieving super Saiyan , I hope u write Saiyan genes properly this time . Now the mc is in marvel , personally i dont believe any character from dragon ball would even reach top 20 of the strongest characters in marvel comics that's opinion bc most of dragon ball scaling cam easily be found in marvel comics that's not saying the MC reaching does power levels wouldn't make sense, the mc is still a Saiyan , saiyan grow stronger in response to stronger opponents , even tho i believe the db is weaker verse , a saiyan cam reach the top tiers of marvel if he has the right experience and training he should reach that power . The technology in marvel comics should be more advanced than dragonball, so better training equipment than in dragon ball
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LIKEalso author i would write in the description that the mc isn't evil or overly selfish .If u don't it will attract the wrong ppl to your fanfic
also right your character personality in the synopsis to avoid attracting the wrong viewers , also delete your reply to me , webnovel readers hate the word nerfed , if u are going to nerf him , make sure it isn't obvious
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please understand nerf is simply another word for rebalancing trust me I'll pan it out for you in later chapters please continue to enjoy
i refuse to put my character in any form of box atm
Daoist4MxvaV:also author i would write in the description that the mc isn't evil or overly selfish .If u don't it will attract the wrong ppl to your fanfic
Tell me you have no idea about Dragon Ball's power scale without saying it. A punch between Beerus and Goku SSJ God made the universe shake, a Goku who did not control the power of SSJ God, imagine SSJ Blue or Ultra Instinct. In physical strength there are very few who can stand up to it, and I'm not talking to you about destructive power. I understand that there are many characters who can warp reality at will but then it will depend on the context, because Dragon Ball characters can nullify techniques and powers with pure power, an example is when Frieza managed to resist the hakai. I'm not saying this just to talk, Goku has enough power to destroy a universe, and it's not even the top 10 of his universe except the other 6, there are still the gods of destruction, the angele, daishinkan, zeno-sama, etc The Marvel universe is very powerful but you underestimate how powerful the Dragon ball characters are.
i am not understanding dragon ball , i watched the show . I just said any feat u see in dragon ball has been done in marvel comics on a much larger scale . U have characters in marvel that can destroy an infinite amount of universes casually
Santy_Melay:Tell me you have no idea about Dragon Ball's power scale without saying it. A punch between Beerus and Goku SSJ God made the universe shake, a Goku who did not control the power of SSJ God, imagine SSJ Blue or Ultra Instinct. In physical strength there are very few who can stand up to it, and I'm not talking to you about destructive power. I understand that there are many characters who can warp reality at will but then it will depend on the context, because Dragon Ball characters can nullify techniques and powers with pure power, an example is when Frieza managed to resist the hakai. I'm not saying this just to talk, Goku has enough power to destroy a universe, and it's not even the top 10 of his universe except the other 6, there are still the gods of destruction, the angele, daishinkan, zeno-sama, etc The Marvel universe is very powerful but you underestimate how powerful the Dragon ball characters are.
Agreed and those aren’t even the heavy hitters eaither and let’s not start on the casual reality manipulators and 4th demensional being it the embodiment of the first universe that galactus us from
Daoist4MxvaV:i am not understanding dragon ball , i watched the show . I just said any feat u see in dragon ball has been done in marvel comics on a much larger scale . U have characters in marvel that can destroy an infinite amount of universes casually
technically 4th dimensional beings in marvel aren't actually 4th dimensional beings , it's more complicated , being who exist on the 4 th dimension actual exist on a much higher plane , even transcending dimensionality . Even tho it's called the 4 th dimension it's not a 4 th dimensional plane
Scrapze:Agreed and those aren’t even the heavy hitters eaither and let’s not start on the casual reality manipulators and 4th demensional being it the embodiment of the first universe that galactus us from
will you do SS4? you can make SS4Blue too... many say SS4 is basically a combination of SS3 ki and Oozaru physical strenght.
William_Conwell:please understand nerf is simply another word for rebalancing trust me I'll pan it out for you in later chapters please continue to enjoy
I was thinking Legendary possibly but i might change my mind
Psan:will you do SS4? you can make SS4Blue too... many say SS4 is basically a combination of SS3 ki and Oozaru physical strenght.
