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Caedus_AldricLv133mth
2024-11-05 09:32

Didn't felt like reading this after louise fiasco you will see it is pretty early in the chapters

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JoanjudoAuthor

Welp sorry that you didn’t like it, hope you do continue to read fanfics you enjoy I know that the Louise fiasco isn’t gonna be for everyone

Caedus_AldricLv13

other than this fiasco the novel is pretty good just like the one i love pjo the son of primordial

Joanjudo:Welp sorry that you didn’t like it, hope you do continue to read fanfics you enjoy I know that the Louise fiasco isn’t gonna be for everyone
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JoanjudoAuthor

I will get back to PJO when I think of a satisfying way to continue the story until then this will be the main novel lol, so I guess I’ll see you in the PJO one though I do think this one will be much better than PJO one since that one was the first time I had written a fanfic with an actual plot XD

Caedus_Aldric:other than this fiasco the novel is pretty good just like the one i love pjo the son of primordial
Caedus_AldricLv13

sure i mean if you are saying this will be better than pjo then i will wait until the chapters are in stock and then read it

Joanjudo:I will get back to PJO when I think of a satisfying way to continue the story until then this will be the main novel lol, so I guess I’ll see you in the PJO one though I do think this one will be much better than PJO one since that one was the first time I had written a fanfic with an actual plot XD
Majestical_potatoLv14

I left the book after this

RustyboiiLv1

yeah... i get it now. can't even bring myself to read more, even tho ik it'll probably get much better after that failed attempt at character development

Arvin_AsadpoorLv4

I didn't drop the story after this, but Allah knows I need somthing to beat right now, even though I shall not leave and have decided to trust the author in this, my disappointment is Immeasurable and My Day is Ruined

Arvin_AsadpoorLv4

Author changed the thing so it's good and understandable this time, is might still upset people a little but thats it a little and its understandable why the mother did what she did, so yep thats good, the most upsetting part is no more

mowLv4

What was the upsetting part?

Arvin_Asadpoor:Author changed the thing so it's good and understandable this time, is might still upset people a little but thats it a little and its understandable why the mother did what she did, so yep thats good, the most upsetting part is no more
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Arvin_AsadpoorLv4

she destroyed their friendship in the first version, from "best friends" to "I knew that guy"

mow:What was the upsetting part?
VeldazaLv4

People like you are the reason I don't trust reviews, shitty mtl Ai fics go to the top while actually good fics are at the bottom.

Caedus_AldricLv13

wym bro after reading the absolute blunder author did with louise character i just didn't feel like reading this fanfic what's so bad about writing my reviews

Veldaza:People like you are the reason I don't trust reviews, shitty mtl Ai fics go to the top while actually good fics are at the bottom.
ChaosLegion555Lv13

Yeah, the whole Louise thing kinda threw me off. I think a really good twist for it would be that all happens and they think they are parting ways, but secretly, they are both ending up going to hogwarts. it would make a lot more sense and feel better. plus the whole outburst about ben that Louise's mom has could be from a magic outburst with Ben having a similar viewpoint as Vernon Dursley. I feel like that is a major missed opportunity.

Joanjudo:Welp sorry that you didn’t like it, hope you do continue to read fanfics you enjoy I know that the Louise fiasco isn’t gonna be for everyone
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