Welp sorry that you didn’t like it, hope you do continue to read fanfics you enjoy I know that the Louise fiasco isn’t gonna be for everyone

other than this fiasco the novel is pretty good just like the one i love pjo the son of primordial

I will get back to PJO when I think of a satisfying way to continue the story until then this will be the main novel lol, so I guess I’ll see you in the PJO one though I do think this one will be much better than PJO one since that one was the first time I had written a fanfic with an actual plot XD

sure i mean if you are saying this will be better than pjo then i will wait until the chapters are in stock and then read it

I left the book after this

yeah... i get it now. can't even bring myself to read more, even tho ik it'll probably get much better after that failed attempt at character development

I didn't drop the story after this, but Allah knows I need somthing to beat right now, even though I shall not leave and have decided to trust the author in this, my disappointment is Immeasurable and My Day is Ruined

Author changed the thing so it's good and understandable this time, is might still upset people a little but thats it a little and its understandable why the mother did what she did, so yep thats good, the most upsetting part is no more

What was the upsetting part?

she destroyed their friendship in the first version, from "best friends" to "I knew that guy"

People like you are the reason I don't trust reviews, shitty mtl Ai fics go to the top while actually good fics are at the bottom.

wym bro after reading the absolute blunder author did with louise character i just didn't feel like reading this fanfic what's so bad about writing my reviews

Yeah, the whole Louise thing kinda threw me off. I think a really good twist for it would be that all happens and they think they are parting ways, but secretly, they are both ending up going to hogwarts. it would make a lot more sense and feel better. plus the whole outburst about ben that Louise's mom has could be from a magic outburst with Ben having a similar viewpoint as Vernon Dursley. I feel like that is a major missed opportunity.