Majestical_potato

See this 😑

F**k that shit !!

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hidenobu or something right ?? it breaks the flow of reading t/n should take care of things like these

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The whole plot point is good though . But the switching between povs should be seamless. You will get it right after some reading and comparing with your work.

author. The first ch itself contains multiple povs - first person, third person, which makes no sense. Honestly, it is tiring to read chapter 1 itself. Please try to change it 🙂

I really don't like his subservient character. Don't be pushed around by others, if you have the power to do so.

I left the book after this

Well, the character scenes had no real meaning. Disappointed with this book 🫠