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R0BLv26mth
2024-10-31 05:36

It's not bad, just don't make the main world too chaotic. By mixing a lot of worlds in already multiverse fanfic will just do you a disservice. Don't choose worlds that are slice of life, you already have enough of them. Currently there's nothing interesting in the main world. In conclusion, the inclusion of harem in future chapters degraded your fanfic, no isekai for you.

A Saiyan's Journey

SenatusAlpha
4.6
312 Chs

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Anes_Kralil_0417
Anes_Kralil_0417Lv3

you know that this ff is a translation right? so why are you giving him advice like he could change anything about it?🤨🤨🤨

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R0B
R0BLv2

Anes_Kralil_0417:you know that this ff is a translation right? so why are you giving him advice like he could change anything about it?🤨🤨🤨
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Anes_Kralil_0417
Anes_Kralil_0417Lv3

i asked

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Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

R0B:
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R0B
R0BLv2

No hard feelings then. Tbh, basically no, I didn't know. Some translators rewrite the fanfic remove Chinese elements and fix the plot holes. Ofc, I can't expect anyone to do that, but it doesn't change the fact that I can't mention ff issues in my review - that's what reviews are for.

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HiddenSwordsman
HiddenSwordsmanLv14

Anti harem.....

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Beyond the fact that the novel is boring, what bothers me most is the typical shitty protagonist who likes to keep a low profile, webnovel is infested with these characters. Seriously, I don't understand why they find it funny.

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SenatusAlpha
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Guys, this fiction has a slow start, and some folks might find it boring, but trust me, this is a literal masterpiece. The fiction has 700+ Chapters, it is a multiversal fic(MC going into different verses), and it is one of the highest-rated fics on Faloo ever. Faloo is a platform like Qidian(the Chinese equivalent of Webnovel). All works on Faloo are paid, and the top brass of writers get to post on Faloo, so stick with the story! You guys won’t be disappointed!

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ReidAstrea
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Had to say some peak myself. From the screen 📱 to the ring 🥊 to the pen 🖊️ to the king 👑 Where's my crown 👑 that's my bling 💎 always drama when I ring 📞 See 👀 if I believe it in my heart ❤️ smash through the ceiling 🏠 cause I'm reaching for the stars ⭐

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SenatusAlpha
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Reveal spoiler

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Praise_TheSun
Praise_TheSunLv4

Its good with a slow start it says dragonball but the world he lives is a mix of different animes and his first dream world is dragonball i will give it a chance seems promising keep up the good work 👍🏻

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ZaelumLv5

Much better than the other Dragon Ball fanfic! READREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREAD

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otakubr
otakubrLv4

Gostei muito, história interessante.Espero que continue a tradução ....................................... .................................

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Magically
MagicallyLv2

Es una traducción bastante buena. Y la historia también, me recuerda a esas historias con Supergene a la hora de narrativa. Es decir, en la forma de desarrollar gramática mente el mundo. No en el contenido o la trama lento pero constante. Deberías de darle una oportunidad.

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