Beyond the fact that the novel is boring, what bothers me most is the typical shitty protagonist who likes to keep a low profile, webnovel is infested with these characters. Seriously, I don't understand why they find it funny.

It could be good, but there is sooooo much booring school life, it's like 2 chapters of DBZ to 5 chapters of school life (friend want to find a girllfriend and mc goes to help). There is always the feeling that there is 2 plots, one good and one booring, and unfortunely there is waaaay more time dedicated to the booring one.

Had to say some peak myself. From the screen 📱 to the ring 🥊 to the pen 🖊️ to the king 👑 Where's my crown 👑 that's my bling 💎 always drama when I ring 📞 See 👀 if I believe it in my heart ❤️ smash through the ceiling 🏠 cause I'm reaching for the stars ⭐

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It's not bad, just don't make the main world too chaotic. By mixing a lot of worlds in already multiverse fanfic will just do you a disservice. Don't choose worlds that are slice of life, you already have enough of them. Currently there's nothing interesting in the main world. In conclusion, the inclusion of harem in future chapters degraded your fanfic, no isekai for you.

Much better than the other Dragon Ball fanfic! READREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREAD

Gostei muito, história interessante.Espero que continue a tradução ....................................... .................................

Es una traducción bastante buena. Y la historia también, me recuerda a esas historias con Supergene a la hora de narrativa. Es decir, en la forma de desarrollar gramática mente el mundo. No en el contenido o la trama lento pero constante. Deberías de darle una oportunidad.

Its good with a slow start it says dragonball but the world he lives is a mix of different animes and his first dream world is dragonball i will give it a chance seems promising keep up the good work 👍🏻