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Magically
MagicallyLv25mth
2024-10-30 07:42

Es una traducción bastante buena. Y la historia también, me recuerda a esas historias con Supergene a la hora de narrativa. Es decir, en la forma de desarrollar gramática mente el mundo. No en el contenido o la trama lento pero constante. Deberías de darle una oportunidad.

A Saiyan's Journey

SenatusAlpha
4.5
290 Chs

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Magically
MagicallyLv2

Que mal escribo... Dios!!!!

5mth
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

dijo que era multiverso , es multiverso de dragón ball o de diferentes anime/manga

5mth
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Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

Beyond the fact that the novel is boring, what bothers me most is the typical shitty protagonist who likes to keep a low profile, webnovel is infested with these characters. Seriously, I don't understand why they find it funny.

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SenatusAlpha
SenatusAlphaAuthor

Guys, this fiction has a slow start, and some folks might find it boring, but trust me, this is a literal masterpiece. The fiction has 700+ Chapters, it is a multiversal fic(MC going into different verses), and it is one of the highest-rated fics on Faloo ever. Faloo is a platform like Qidian(the Chinese equivalent of Webnovel). All works on Faloo are paid, and the top brass of writers get to post on Faloo, so stick with the story! You guys won’t be disappointed!

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Celleborn
CellebornLv2

It could be good, but there is sooooo much booring school life, it's like 2 chapters of DBZ to 5 chapters of school life (friend want to find a girllfriend and mc goes to help). There is always the feeling that there is 2 plots, one good and one booring, and unfortunely there is waaaay more time dedicated to the booring one.

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ReidAstrea
ReidAstreaLv3

Had to say some peak myself. From the screen 📱 to the ring 🥊 to the pen 🖊️ to the king 👑 Where's my crown 👑 that's my bling 💎 always drama when I ring 📞 See 👀 if I believe it in my heart ❤️ smash through the ceiling 🏠 cause I'm reaching for the stars ⭐

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SenatusAlpha
SenatusAlphaAuthor

Reveal spoiler

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R0B
R0BLv2

It's not bad, just don't make the main world too chaotic. By mixing a lot of worlds in already multiverse fanfic will just do you a disservice. Don't choose worlds that are slice of life, you already have enough of them. Currently there's nothing interesting in the main world. In conclusion, the inclusion of harem in future chapters degraded your fanfic, no isekai for you.

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Zaelum
ZaelumLv5

Much better than the other Dragon Ball fanfic! READREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREAD

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otakubr
otakubrLv4

Gostei muito, história interessante.Espero que continue a tradução ....................................... .................................

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Praise_TheSun
Praise_TheSunLv4

Its good with a slow start it says dragonball but the world he lives is a mix of different animes and his first dream world is dragonball i will give it a chance seems promising keep up the good work 👍🏻

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