Well, it started off really well, but it kind of lost its charm when he started teaching “Kuina” the Breathing that was the secret to his strength, basically he gave her his power just because he could, without any reason. It's like you're handing out a weapon to someone who could use it against you at any time, that attitude was pure idiocy...
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LIKEWhat Kuina was taught was just the simplified and strengthening technique and not the entirety of sun breathing technique. This was done because Ron wanted to save her from her ill fate , for which she needed to become stronger. Also , Ron has received the sign in system which grants him numerous powers some of which have been revealed yet and some will be revealed in upcoming chapters.
Harem or not..? If yes, then how much
I see, so you're one of those people that hate mc teaching others to get strong using his technique huh.. there's no problem to have different MC preferences but to actually 2.5 star this is also pure nonsense as well. you did not explain why the fic is bad apart from your kuina agenda.
En fin, hay romance? O no hay? Es raro que no haya, considerando que one piece tiene muchas chicas hermosas, no eres un buen hombre si ni siquiera tratas de conquistar una, chicas como vivi, Rebeca, nami, etc, cada una tiene dies estrellas, el Harem no es necesario, pero sin duda es necesario un buen interés amoroso, Por cierto, doy todo mi apoyo a Uta, hasta ahora mi FL favorita de todo one piece, luego Rebeca, y por supuesto viví, en ese orden.
I don't get why people want an MC who gets a crew, yet that crew is left far, far behind. What's the point of having other characters who don't matter? There is basically no downside to teaching her even the full skill. He's going to get far more abilities, and he is going to grow far faster. At least this would give her some relevance.