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The_Paragon_White
The_Paragon_WhiteLv46mth
2024-10-28 02:40

Well, it started off really well, but it kind of lost its charm when he started teaching “Kuina” the Breathing that was the secret to his strength, basically he gave her his power just because he could, without any reason. It's like you're handing out a weapon to someone who could use it against you at any time, that attitude was pure idiocy...

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machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

Is she at least gonna be part of his crew of did he just teach her for nothing?

The_Paragon_White
The_Paragon_WhiteLv4

Yes, she ran away to join his team. But kind of meh, it was done in a very nonsensical way.

machadogbc:Is she at least gonna be part of his crew of did he just teach her for nothing?
machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

It’s not all that bad then, who is in the team anyway?

The_Paragon_White:Yes, she ran away to join his team. But kind of meh, it was done in a very nonsensical way.
The_Paragon_White
The_Paragon_WhiteLv4

For now it's just her

machadogbc:It’s not all that bad then, who is in the team anyway?
ElvenKing20
ElvenKing20Author

What Kuina was taught was just the simplified and strengthening technique and not the entirety of sun breathing technique. This was done because Ron wanted to save her from her ill fate , for which she needed to become stronger. Also , Ron has received the sign in system which grants him numerous powers some of which have been revealed yet and some will be revealed in upcoming chapters.

Danonino
DanoninoLv6

He did, he got the sword

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UnenlightenedOne
UnenlightenedOneLv14

it's not world breaking technique so idk why you are making big deal out of it.

The_Paragon_White
The_Paragon_WhiteLv4

I'm not making a fuss, I just mentioned one of the points that made me not like this story.

UnenlightenedOne:it's not world breaking technique so idk why you are making big deal out of it.
Sahil_SA
Sahil_SALv2

Harem or not..? If yes, then how much

ElvenKing20:What Kuina was taught was just the simplified and strengthening technique and not the entirety of sun breathing technique. This was done because Ron wanted to save her from her ill fate , for which she needed to become stronger. Also , Ron has received the sign in system which grants him numerous powers some of which have been revealed yet and some will be revealed in upcoming chapters.
The_forgotten_ones
The_forgotten_onesLv4

I mean, I don't get what some of you guys are complaining he has power that other people are able to get through training, so unless you want a story to only use one-piece powers in his crew why tho, the mc could make them powerful by teaching them his powers.

HollyRisk
HollyRiskLv15

I see, so you're one of those people that hate mc teaching others to get strong using his technique huh.. there's no problem to have different MC preferences but to actually 2.5 star this is also pure nonsense as well. you did not explain why the fic is bad apart from your kuina agenda.

The_Paragon_White:I'm not making a fuss, I just mentioned one of the points that made me not like this story.
DonGuirit
DonGuiritLv4

is this gonna be a catch em all fic? cause its kinda tiring if it is like all the other op ffs out there

The_Paragon_White
The_Paragon_WhiteLv4

From what you're demonstrating, it's quite possible that this is the case, but I haven't read any further, so I can't say for sure.

DonGuirit:is this gonna be a catch em all fic? cause its kinda tiring if it is like all the other op ffs out there
Gilgamesh1234
Gilgamesh1234Lv4

I don’t mind but he has to write the romance well not have it instant love unless maybe for Hancock but that it

DonGuirit:is this gonna be a catch em all fic? cause its kinda tiring if it is like all the other op ffs out there
ToonDragonable
ToonDragonableLv3

Pft!!! Right....Do you have trust issues in RL?

The_Paragon_White
The_Paragon_WhiteLv4

Ignorance brings bliss, truly an idiot who trusts everyone is a rare sight these days. Keep it up, brother...

ToonDragonable:Pft!!! Right....Do you have trust issues in RL?
The_Paragon_White
The_Paragon_WhiteLv4

Ignorance brings bliss, truly an idiot who trusts everyone is a rare sight these days. Keep it up, brother...

ToonDragonable:Pft!!! Right....Do you have trust issues in RL?
Braian_Rodriguez
Braian_RodriguezLv1

En fin, hay romance? O no hay? Es raro que no haya, considerando que one piece tiene muchas chicas hermosas, no eres un buen hombre si ni siquiera tratas de conquistar una, chicas como vivi, Rebeca, nami, etc, cada una tiene dies estrellas, el Harem no es necesario, pero sin duda es necesario un buen interés amoroso, Por cierto, doy todo mi apoyo a Uta, hasta ahora mi FL favorita de todo one piece, luego Rebeca, y por supuesto viví, en ese orden.

MoneyMonarch
MoneyMonarchLv10

I understand what you mean, but to say that Breath of the Sun is the source of Prota's power is nonsense. He has a login system and, with each good login, he can gain new and better powers.

Unstable_One
Unstable_OneLv5

I don't get why people want an MC who gets a crew, yet that crew is left far, far behind. What's the point of having other characters who don't matter? There is basically no downside to teaching her even the full skill. He's going to get far more abilities, and he is going to grow far faster. At least this would give her some relevance.

ElvenKing20:What Kuina was taught was just the simplified and strengthening technique and not the entirety of sun breathing technique. This was done because Ron wanted to save her from her ill fate , for which she needed to become stronger. Also , Ron has received the sign in system which grants him numerous powers some of which have been revealed yet and some will be revealed in upcoming chapters.
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