Alright I finished all the chapters so far and I got say so far it is good but I do have problems with the story first why did this god not give the mc chakra like make him unique in the story like the mc had found a way to use his byakugan with this life energy bs and if this is life energy could be used by the mc It can be used by other people second there is a Hyuga clan in this making the mc to me feel less special. The mc barley knows the story of AOT up to season 2 which doesn’t even matter cause it’s gonna be even more dangerous with the changes like in my mind I don’t see anyway the mc would be able to survive in this world without plot it’s not like he can create ninjutsu he is restricted to Hyuga techs.
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Did you like at my exact wording, he would start, it says, “you will only receive the Hyuga clan basic….” It did not say he would be restricted that alone, he can always try and learn more, as for why I call life energy, chakra is quite literally just life energy, later on I just start calling it chakra instead of life energy, also him being a hyuga play an important part of the plot, him being unaware of the plot is my way of forcing myself to not be stuck to the canon, for example, I can’t have him randomly going to castle Utgard on the night of the attack why, because he doesn’t even know it exist, I can’t make him go the easy way out because he is unaware of the easy way out, basically I removed my ability to give him a cope out option
he isn't learning any jutsu as he doesn't know jack about chakra or hand seals, the entire shabang. unless plot requires for it, of course.
ThePpp_Pppp:Did you like at my exact wording, he would start, it says, “you will only receive the Hyuga clan basic….” It did not say he would be restricted that alone, he can always try and learn more, as for why I call life energy, chakra is quite literally just life energy, later on I just start calling it chakra instead of life energy, also him being a hyuga play an important part of the plot, him being unaware of the plot is my way of forcing myself to not be stuck to the canon, for example, I can’t have him randomly going to castle Utgard on the night of the attack why, because he doesn’t even know it exist, I can’t make him go the easy way out because he is unaware of the easy way out, basically I removed my ability to give him a cope out option
He can still expell chakra from his Tenketsu points, so stuff like the Rasengan shidori are still on the table
DaoistCkdsB0:he isn't learning any jutsu as he doesn't know jack about chakra or hand seals, the entire shabang. unless plot requires for it, of course.
that requires precise control of chakra or life energy, in this case. right now, he doesn't know anything about chakra. so he will have to invent a whole power system that works before he can even think of performing jutsu or any of that shit. an alternative to that would be an inherent skill or ability to sense and control life energy. in other words, plot. that too can be enjoyable if done properly. so do your own thing. take the advice that you think is good, leave out the rest.
ThePpp_Pppp:He can still expell chakra from his Tenketsu points, so stuff like the Rasengan shidori are still on the table
.. Harem... Romance... Lemon👀❓🤔
ThePpp_Pppp:He can still expell chakra from his Tenketsu points, so stuff like the Rasengan shidori are still on the table
Harem,no,Romance yes, Lemon, yesnt
DaoistflTMU7:.. Harem... Romance... Lemon👀❓🤔
