this entire story feels like an afterthought. the characters have 2 brain cells each. although writing quality is bad, with lots of mistakes, at least it's readable.

Ok I've read enough chapters and there's a lot of logic missing. First, grammar is sometimes readable and sometimes not. Second, his powers is being a pure hyuga which means he should have awakened Tenseigan and we all know where hyuga's bloodline come from(otsutsuki) which means being pure hyuga=pure otsutsuki which means =universe or galaxy level threat Thirdly, a pure hyuga has a lot of talent and you make him start with 30meters vision which is underrated and him having to train a lot just too get strong by not much considering he is a pure hyuga is bad. Fourth, the reason the hyuga clan was not as powerful as the Uchiha clan was because of the caged bird seal so it pretty much limits their strength at best as the hyuga main family was pretty much not training to get strong and are protected and barely get combat experience and the hyuga branch family was pretty much limits by the caged bird seal. Fifth, the author saying the hyuga doesn't have to watch their family members die to awaken Tenseigan is utter nonsense i mean to awaken Tenseigan you have to steal your clansmens Byakugan and merge them or get a hyuga branch family's Byakugan(Konoha's Hyuga Clan) and main family(otsutsuki on the moon) and combine them This shows author underestimates a pure hyuga, I mean a pure hyuga can literally awaken Tenseigan just by being there and we have known in boruto that combining the main family branch(otsutsuki on the moon) and branch family(hyuga clan in konoha) can awaken Tenseigan) which shows author hasn't known that knowledge or doesn't want to say it (I mean Hanabi's Byakugan was taken by Toneri Otsutsuki so he can awaken the Tenseigan) This is your logic missing author!

I liked the idea of this story but the grammar makes it quite difficult to read and i just get confused at certain times, one of the annoying parts was how stupid the main character is especially when he reveals all of his secrets. Supposedly it’s because he was extremely tired but honestly that’s not a good enough excuse for someone to spout all of their secrets

Eu tô gostando bastante dessa fanfic espero muito que continue assim eu recomendo muito essa história para outras pessoas também ela tá sendo bem divertida de acompanhar e é uma leitura agradável espero muito que essa história não caia eu adorei muito ela 👍👍👍

It's Good and Love the book, at least all my biases survive and live a normal life 😊.

It was ok. Not completely shitty, not particularly good either. Some developments were pretty stupid and the grammar is kind of shitty, though.

Idk man it’s not as good as your ther fanfics but it’s still fire I like it I still hope u finish the blue lock one but ig u prolly won’t

Enjoyed it so far. Be proud author, you can cook.

i'll give it 5 stars because i liked the novel, i don't know how to evaluate and...