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In English 100,000 is written so that the math is 100 times 1,000. In Chinese 100,000 is written so that the math is 10 times 10,000. AI don't think, they "translate" text into tokens then do whatever they do to write a response. What happened here is that the AI tokenized the number into two distinct entities, one token for the 10 and one for the 10,000. From here it's your luck that will determine if the AI makes the correct association between these tokens and gives you 100,000 or if it will not and will give you what he thinks is the most likely number and it will be 10,000. Here it failed, so author probably used a free AI model.
there's far and far... here it's too far
100% this I'm not an optimist though so I'll drop the story, giving the credit of the dragon to someone else and creating multiple factions like this really was a deal breaker for no reason
Ned can't be stupid enough to not see that he was hiding his worth
I have to say, personally I like these random POV that give us more information on what's happening/happened, there's more soul to it that simply the narrator telling it so I approve of it and hope for more but I understand why people are complaining about this chapter, it's an OC character that took 1 complete chapter just to add life to the story, not to progress the plot. working on balancing these points could be a good way to improve your writing
most boring arc as of now, I was hopeful that it would have stopped here but alas you broke my dream, the knowledge that it will be of importance again later is something I didn't want to know
every authors has health problem at some point, I think it's a curse, you should probably go see a priest to be sure
they already did?
what do you think 10 and 6 is ?
poor management even before he starts his kingdom