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Kil0
Kil0Lv44mth
2024-10-15 00:29

Really love the cheat that the MC gets in this story, I always love Naruto fics with cultivation. Unfortunately the writing quality is poor and story is just bad. MC is arrogant, obnoxious, and too stupid to survive a few days without plot armor. Lot of wasted potential here

Reborn in Konoha; I Think I’m Cultivating Immortality

HyppoTL
4.5
354 Chs

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HyppoTL
HyppoTLAuthor

Thank you for the review, And I have to say, I respect your opinion and preferences. But I still want to ask, how far did you read? I've been translating this for the last few weeks now, and I haven't really felt these character traits from mc until now, he may act a bit nosy in the beginning chapters, but he's quite cautious and meticulous when it counts (When lives are on the line.) Of course that could just be my perspective though.

4mth
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Vastoking
VastokingLv6

ive read 3 and it is 2-3/5 so far.

HyppoTL:Thank you for the review, And I have to say, I respect your opinion and preferences. But I still want to ask, how far did you read? I've been translating this for the last few weeks now, and I haven't really felt these character traits from mc until now, he may act a bit nosy in the beginning chapters, but he's quite cautious and meticulous when it counts (When lives are on the line.) Of course that could just be my perspective though.
4mth
3
HyppoTL
HyppoTLAuthor

I respect your opinion, but you should try reading this a bit further. I'm not here to argue that this book is the best piece of fiction that exists in the world, but you can't really judge a book from 3k words. and it get's better.

Vastoking:ive read 3 and it is 2-3/5 so far.
4mth
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Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv4

Romance?

HyppoTL:I respect your opinion, but you should try reading this a bit further. I'm not here to argue that this book is the best piece of fiction that exists in the world, but you can't really judge a book from 3k words. and it get's better.
4mth
HyppoTL
HyppoTLAuthor

yes

Lord_Azathoth:Romance?
4mth
1
Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv4

who?😶

HyppoTL:yes
4mth
HyppoTL
HyppoTLAuthor

spoiler . . . . Tsunade

Lord_Azathoth:who?😶
4mth
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Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv4

Oh

HyppoTL:spoiler . . . . Tsunade
4mth
2
Xlice_cxlice
Xlice_cxliceLv1

Not a suprise at this point

HyppoTL:spoiler . . . . Tsunade
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Gwiber
GwiberLv14

When will the romance start?

HyppoTL:spoiler . . . . Tsunade
4mth
HyppoTL
HyppoTLAuthor

it's a thing from the start

Gwiber:When will the romance start?
4mth
1
Ouroboros_00
Ouroboros_00Lv2

You should read it further the author and translator did amazing job , starting 2-5 chapters you will think it's normal but it get's better later , the only problem for me was his name it took me a good while to get used to it although i usually don't comment but it is one of a few works in my library

3mth
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Kil0
Kil0Lv4

Thanks for the suggestion. I gave it an honest shot, but I somehow just couldn’t find any enjoyment. If you like this type of fic you should definitely check out “I, Yu Uchiha, am devoted to cultivating immortality”

Ouroboros_00:You should read it further the author and translator did amazing job , starting 2-5 chapters you will think it's normal but it get's better later , the only problem for me was his name it took me a good while to get used to it although i usually don't comment but it is one of a few works in my library
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SAINT_of_ORIGIN
SAINT_of_ORIGINLv14

well said buddy.

2mth
1
Ouroboros_00
Ouroboros_00Lv2

Well everyone has different preference

1mth
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HipposarecoolLv14

Story seems good, no harem and it seems pretty interesting and the translation is really good

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Reveal spoiler

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birtek89
birtek89Lv3

I know it's a translation, but it's very annoying having to read full names all the time, especially the mc. Reduce it to just Hui please, I think it's possible to do that in translation. The story itself is a little poor, with an excess of praise for the MC's appearance, there is also the fact that 6-year-old girls make declarations of love and seek relationships, which is quite silly and unrealistic, at most there could be admiration juvenile (that's what we expect from many Chinese authors and their strange fetishes). I'm still at the beginning of the story. Regarding cultivation with different powers, I don't see a problem, as long as it is well planned and doesn't make the mc too op immediately and of course an idiot. And I hope the other ninjas aren't portrayed as idiots where only the MC can do something (there's a lot of Chinese history that you can't follow because of this).

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Action_Potential
Action_PotentialLv1

the translation and original work are written excellently. background is 5/5 cause its naruto the character are nice and some are original. the story development tho has left alot to be desired. the character is very shallow guy with protect my comrades mentality and no original thoughts. just goes with the flow. the kid romance is very jarring to read as I don't really like to read about two kids mooching or hugging or flirting tbh. esp when the main character is an adult mind transmigrator. honestly its just ew. and the glazing in the chapter is insane. sometimes the glazing of background character could take 4-5 chapters. after he got some fame every move he does background npcs must glaze him for 2 paragraphs minimum. its really annoying and makes me skip chapters. overall 3.5/5

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Ricardo_Miloos
Ricardo_MiloosLv5

Really good translation. Liked the premise and hoped it delves into village management after he becomes Hokage. Full Raw name?

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_Harsh_
_Harsh_Lv14

currently around chapter 60, the story is going in a good direction for me, I especially like how the author has developed the character of mc and how side characters feel real aswell especially is squadmates.

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SukMiCokBich
SukMiCokBichLv13

Don't know if the translator made a mistake, but the so-called author in the description is not the real author. The real author is: 余青衣.

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