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2024-11-08 06:18

currently around chapter 60, the story is going in a good direction for me, I especially like how the author has developed the character of mc and how side characters feel real aswell especially is squadmates.

Reborn in Konoha; I Think I’m Cultivating Immortality

HyppoTL
4.4
483 Chs

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Kil0
Kil0Lv4

Really love the cheat that the MC gets in this story, I always love Naruto fics with cultivation. Unfortunately the writing quality is poor and story is just bad. MC is arrogant, obnoxious, and too stupid to survive a few days without plot armor. Lot of wasted potential here

7mth

Hipposarecool
HipposarecoolLv14

Story seems good, no harem and it seems pretty interesting and the translation is really good

7mth
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ò_óllllō_ōllllô_ôLv3

i hate cultivation(qi) and swords(sword aura) based stories... it's just too simple and predictable...

5mth
binah
binahLv4

its very good no harem.......would recommend

3mth
Reimoss
ReimossLv14

Reveal spoiler

6mth
birtek89
birtek89Lv3

I know it's a translation, but it's very annoying having to read full names all the time, especially the mc. Reduce it to just Hui please, I think it's possible to do that in translation. The story itself is a little poor, with an excess of praise for the MC's appearance, there is also the fact that 6-year-old girls make declarations of love and seek relationships, which is quite silly and unrealistic, at most there could be admiration juvenile (that's what we expect from many Chinese authors and their strange fetishes). I'm still at the beginning of the story. Regarding cultivation with different powers, I don't see a problem, as long as it is well planned and doesn't make the mc too op immediately and of course an idiot. And I hope the other ninjas aren't portrayed as idiots where only the MC can do something (there's a lot of Chinese history that you can't follow because of this).

5mth
REFO
REFOLv13

SIGH..... the translation is fine . the story itself is GARBAGE. no matter how i tried to think otherwise . Chinese novel.. what else can i say??

3mth
Ricardo_Miloos
Ricardo_MiloosLv5

Really good translation. Liked the premise and hoped it delves into village management after he becomes Hokage. Full Raw name?

6mth
ScepticalFrog
ScepticalFrogLv4

Reveal spoiler

1mth
Action_Potential
Action_PotentialLv1

the translation and original work are written excellently. background is 5/5 cause its naruto the character are nice and some are original. the story development tho has left alot to be desired. the character is very shallow guy with protect my comrades mentality and no original thoughts. just goes with the flow. the kid romance is very jarring to read as I don't really like to read about two kids mooching or hugging or flirting tbh. esp when the main character is an adult mind transmigrator. honestly its just ew. and the glazing in the chapter is insane. sometimes the glazing of background character could take 4-5 chapters. after he got some fame every move he does background npcs must glaze him for 2 paragraphs minimum. its really annoying and makes me skip chapters. overall 3.5/5

4mth
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