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k1lausNamikaze
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2024-10-15 22:53

The idea is certainly innovative, especially considering the scarcity of BC fics. Until chapter 5, the execution has been very good, the MC is interesting and his writing is very good, and I have just one suggestion, divide your paragraphs, this makes the reading more fluid. Anyway, the story has been enjoyable, I'll probably do a new review in the future.

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I'll try to make smaller paragraphs.

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