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Heroov
HeroovLv142mth
2025-01-19 20:46

A very good and planned book with excellent writing quality, however it is very slow paced, which is good in the beginning to get an understanding of what the book is about, but what is crazy and hilarious about the book, is that the author clearly stated that the book would be more fast paced after chapter 50, and I can say there is no difference at all it has been 100 chapters and it has been four days in the book, it is pretty crazy in my world, and I feel that the author over describes somethings in the novel, I'm wondering if when it's been 10 days in the book, we've reached chapter 500???? But if you enjoy a slow-paced book with a lot of information about everything, I recommend this one for you. I'm sorry but i drop here maybe will comeback to read it on a site that has it free.....

Evolving My Undead Legion In A Game-Like World

_Drakon
4.4
237 Chs

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ShominSenpai
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would u like to read my new novel Crimson Code: last descent ?

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MiasmaLotus
MiasmaLotusLv15

story seems to have a lot of potential, not fast-paced, which is a good thing. As seen to many of these stories, just shoot off and lose all integrity. it is my hope this book stays on the good path and has many chapters ahead of it.

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Rkwhi2
Rkwhi2Lv4

I can’t stop reading. This book has so much potential and especially after Volume One everything starts to pick up speed. Believe me countine to read until you read a little bit of Volume Two before dropping. I really hope this book doesn’t get dropped.

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_Drakon
_DrakonAuthor

I know this book might seem similar to others you’ve read—maybe it even shares some familiar tropes—but let me assure you, it’s not the same. This story has a real sense of direction, so it might feel a bit slow at times. That’s because it’s not just about constant leveling up, blowing up planets, or seducing people (honestly, I don’t even know how to write that last part, so you’re safe there!). I’ve put effort into building a solid plot, so please be patient—you’re in for a lot!

3mth
Dao_Of_Sauce
Dao_Of_SauceLv14

Reveal spoiler

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Master_Reese
Master_ReeseLv15

story's not bad but author is definitely pushing a ton of filler and repeating things to up chapter prices slimy behavior at its finest. also the character was supposed reincarnated after making to his 20s but acts extremely immature and lacks forsight 🙄

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Melon_daomaster_9
Melon_daomaster_9Lv13

This story’s got potential, like a tortoise taking its sweet time, which I love lol😂 But there’s too much filler, like stuffing a sandwich with air.😭🙏 Still, the plot’s got me hooked, so keep it up! Just trim the filler, and we are good to go! Author be like:

2mth
AeonAeon
AeonAeonLv13

Is this harem or no harem?? Hope it's single FL

3mth
rayoloco
rayolocoLv14

The story is interesting so far but there is too much filler in the chapters. Also the chapters are short, so sometimes feels somewhat anoying having to read 7 chapters just for something that in 3 chapters could be done and it would be as good as doing in 7 chapters. Webnovel is not cheap for reading. Quality does not consist of oversaturating with details that do not interest. But as i say the story is interesting so good job and keep going, this just how it feels for me

2mth
Kevin_Herrington
Kevin_HerringtonLv15

Characters and setting seem to be well fleshed out,though with odd, somewhat justifable hiccups. Power scaking and growth of the mc is acceptable. What really kills the story is the writers habit to either ramble on in a circle and often repeat information. Perhaps in later chapters the writer will learn to right more fluidly, I, unfortunately will not be there to read it. This work does not deserve a ranking spot on the golden ticket list.

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