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Dao_Of_Sauce
Dao_Of_SauceLv145d
2024-12-10 12:55

This story has potential to be great. The world building is better than most stories on this app while leaving some questions about the true nature of the world. However, I am pretty disappointed in the free chapters of the story. There was too much exposition in places where it was inappropriate, such as right before or after battles. The size of chapters are pretty short too, which means the majority of the chapter is filled with lots of information that doesn’t really matter at the moment. The author had a chance to show us the world that awakeners enter, showing us struggle, mistakes, and ultimately triumph. Instead we get two fights with some slimes and then a couple more monsters are quickly killed of screen before he goes back home. I get that the first volume was supposed to be slow, but it felt like almost nothing important happened. We still know nothing of his skills or talent. I can’t see myself coming back to spend money on this story if it stays like this.

Evolving My Undead Legion In A Game-Like World

_Drakon
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68 Chs

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_Drakon
_DrakonAuthor

The story is quite adequately paced in its recent chapters. I'm not shooting my own horns but if you can endure till chapter 50(even before then as starting from chapter 44 I barely add new world building info) you won't regret it

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Dao_Of_Sauce
Dao_Of_SauceLv14

It’s less about enduring and more about should I even spend money on this story. Regardless I think you have a good thing going and I wish you luck.

_Drakon:The story is quite adequately paced in its recent chapters. I'm not shooting my own horns but if you can endure till chapter 50(even before then as starting from chapter 44 I barely add new world building info) you won't regret it
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MiasmaLotus
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story seems to have a lot of potential, not fast-paced, which is a good thing. As seen to many of these stories, just shoot off and lose all integrity. it is my hope this book stays on the good path and has many chapters ahead of it.

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Rkwhi2
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I can’t stop reading. This book has so much potential and especially after Volume One everything starts to pick up speed. Believe me countine to read until you read a little bit of Volume Two before dropping. I really hope this book doesn’t get dropped.

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_Drakon
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I know this book might seem similar to others you’ve read—maybe it even shares some familiar tropes—but let me assure you, it’s not the same. This story has a real sense of direction, so it might feel a bit slow at times. That’s because it’s not just about constant leveling up, blowing up planets, or seducing people (honestly, I don’t even know how to write that last part, so you’re safe there!). I’ve put effort into building a solid plot, so please be patient—you’re in for a lot!

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Is this harem or no harem?? Hope it's single FL

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A review........................................................................................................................................................

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Drakonius
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There are several novels similar to this—or rather, this novel is similar to others—but anyway lol, this is one of the few, if not the only one, that doesn’t lose its integrity. While it may seem similar on the surface, the plot is far more solid and doesn’t shoot off in random directions like a rocket.

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Emmanuel_Peter203
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Not much of the worlds have been shown yet but solid so far. More chapters needed though😅 .......................................................

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At first glance, this novel might seem like just another one in the genre, but it stands out for how well it handles its story. Unlike others that lose focus or rush through events, this one maintains a steady pace and a strong sense of direction. The plot feels cohesive, with clear goals and development, making it far more engaging than others that scatter their ideas without tying them together properly. It’s familiar but fresh in execution.

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