This fanfic has a enormous amount of potential. And as a veteran translator/reader my advise is for the author to slow down on the skills. None really cares about them, they are only to give flavor or for plot. So slow down with them, and focus in the story. Go slow, as you can delve in a lot of waifus story and other worlds to have 'fun'. So don't make him OP suddenly or you will instakill the fanfic. Make a list of anime/games you want to visit and give them a power level, and scale the MC's power as you go up on the list. Don't collet waifus, choose one to three for franchise. Like Haruna and Lala and someone. That way you won't cluster the fic to much. The main reason for this is because you're going to make the MC go to other worlds. That's about it. The writting is good, and pretty much all the rest is good, so nothing to pick about it. Have fun writting it is the most important part, and if you want to make money of it like some others here, you can! By steady, and don't bother reading too much the comments. Write, enjoy and make a good story!
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This was actually fire advice, 2 don't delve into others relations not related to mc can make readers avoid the fic. 3 don't show favoritism to another mc/cast lets say insult mc and he still trys being buddy buddy
masssSs capitulos me gusto la historia sería bueno que lo recompensarán con el talento de yoirishi de kimesup no yaiba
Actually good advice I’m shocked
this was how to make a good fanfic 101
