Updated review from 4.6 to 2.4 It could be a lot better. Roger group is not explored. Not sure why Oden's family is not on the ship or Nico Olivia. Mc is very passive and I don't like the fact that he didn't eat a devil fruit to make himself weaker. This story has a lot of mistakes story wise, for example Enel is the god, when he should still be a child in Birka as best. It's clear that author knew all of that, but still wrote it as is. Translation is good. In summary - this ff is a joke, because author treats it in such a way.
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Author here… Just so you know...Toki is present, but Enel isn’t a god yet, he’s still in the planning phase. As I mentioned in the author’s note (if you read it), the four priests consider him a god because they’re the only ones aware of his lightning-like abilities. Keep in mind, they don’t know what Devil Fruits are. I also explained that Birka is still camped in the Upper Yard. They haven’t been driven out or forced to hide, as Enel hasn’t made his move yet. And no, this isn’t a translation, I write everything myself. (in case you read my synopsis, even if, minor changes It's still a Fan-Fic)
When did Robins mom join Roger?
Stop with the bullshittery, fix the story instead. You are just playing a gotcha game.
No she was not.
Sorry, it was a long standing theory that she was, because Oden didn't exist at the time, my mistake
