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One Piece: Human God

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Human_Draco
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Author here, I'm just writing this to have fun. Might get serious later on but right now, I'm in college and just want to spend more time to get my writing better and such. Not much else, if you are wanting to ask more question just to comment and ask something or give me some suggestions!

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cole1
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'tis awesome. minor minor spolier(?) not really but eh, not gonna bother it's pretty new so things could change, either for better or worse, but so far, so good. it's writing quality is good... almost like he actually knows english! it's wish fulfillment so.. yeah, i'm kinda expecting the author to start getting writers block pretty quickly but if he can keep adding some unique(ish) OC stuff whenever he doesn't know how to continue on with the adventure to laugh tale then i think everything will turn out good. as for character design? well... he looks dope so theres that. no, but really, the mc is kind of like a mix of "curious" and "saitama", so it's not very original but i can't fault author for that since being invincible would probably get old pretty quick and you can't really make any hard, challenging, sit on the edge of the seat type of fight scenes since well... he's invincible. oh! but if the author can kinda take from what the original one punch man did (with kind of "growing" instead of instantly invincible) like say... making up some hidden power OC to fight against the MC. not very original but hey, it could work. anyway i got off track... the world background is.. well once piece and the timeline is when roger is going through the grand line/new world and onwards to laugh tale. roger's bounty right now is 3 billion if that helps anyone. anywho... i don't really got anything else to say honestly... to me, it's a pretty damn good story so far with what all of those chinese ones using those humor that i can't understand and their casual racist remarks that the translators seem to never choose to take out. ok! bye bye! good luck author!

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R0B
R0BLv2

Updated review from 4.6 to 2.4 It could be a lot better. Roger group is not explored. Not sure why Oden's family is not on the ship or Nico Olivia. Mc is very passive and I don't like the fact that he didn't eat a devil fruit to make himself weaker. This story has a lot of mistakes story wise, for example Enel is the god, when he should still be a child in Birka as best. It's clear that author knew all of that, but still wrote it as is. Translation is good. In summary - this ff is a joke, because author treats it in such a way.

1mth
Killer_Bee_44321
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Small_Person
Small_PersonLv2

Really good in my opinion. But could be better with more action with Draco. To future readers. This author writes more about background character building up the scene for the big fight. Which honestly is my favorite. There OC are definitively different from others. You also get world building. Draco though, to me doesn't seem to have much of an emotional pursue yet. Hoping that he soon does. His updates are pretty decent. Grammar gets way better after the first few chapter. Author says he start using Grammarly and has a proof reader for better flow. Good luck author. Same to the proof reader.

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