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Holo_LoverLv22mth
2024-10-31 09:02

For those of you who came to the reviews to see if it's worth reading, just know that if you are very particular about how the author writes, plot holes and everything else, then this book is not for you. The book is well written, there are almost no grammatical errors, but there are many things that could have been done better. However, as the author mentioned, he is just doing this for fun in his free time. In short, if you are very critical, don't read it, you won't like it. If you read just for fun, like me, then I recommend reading it, it's an interesting story despite everything.

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Falsic
FalsicLv15

To reinforce this point, the author has issued the 2nd (last) warning after receiving constructive criticism. They will stop writing if they get any more, so it is not an exaggeration to say it's take it or leave it.

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