Holo_Lover

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It doesn't sound bad, looks interesting for now. But I recommend using Chat GPT, or another AI, to help you fix spelling and grammar mistakes, there are a lot of errors from what I could see while reading. Also, it's up to you, but my suggestion is to use '...' instead of *...* for thoughts, it's better in most cases. But like I said, it depends on what you prefer.

I really like this book, I wish the author would release chapters more frequently...But I understand that many times this is not possible. As long as the story continues, for me, it's fine!

Please, make the paragraphs shorter, there are some that are HUMONGOUS

It's a very good read. The grammar is great, and the character interactions are also interesting. Most people's criticisms are about it not being yuri, harem, etc. (honestly, it disgusts me, want to read porn? Go to a site with porn books, my god) and because of the pronouns, which make no sense, since both Artoria and Mordred pretended to be men in the time of Camelot, so I don't see a problem with using the masculine pronoun to refer to them for now. The only real problem is that the story isn't progressing, it's been the same for 20 chapters, and only now, in chapter 33, does it seem like it's going to change. Anyway, I don't mind it, because I have patience and don't spend all day reading, but I can't say the same for other people. So if you're impatient, add the book to your library, and come back later to read it.

Tiamat*

I really love this one book, thanks for the translation!

Don't think I will write again, at least, not for a long while. I've been writting fo like 4 years, I lost a lot of motivation to writting, and I also don't have much time to write or think about it now. That's life for ya

You mean my book Zoe Twilight? It was just an idea I had, never rlly think about actually write it

Is this a book by the same author as the book WiseTl is translating? If so, I think I'll really like it.