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Knight_Noctis
Knight_NoctisLv47mth
2024-10-09 12:42

In terms of story quality , it might not be that bad, but sadly, there is so much mistranslation. It completely destroyed the immersion . Saying the sound of squirtle as jenny or Johnny, sometimes saying kami , then there is mistranslation of pokemon names. Using the word "breeding" instead of training constantly got me confused. I'm still not sure what he's talking about arcanine getting killed also. If the translator fixed this minor mistakes, this story has got incredible potential.

Reborn as Gary Oak in pokemon world

Poke_writer
4.1
178 Chs

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Poke_writer
Poke_writerAuthor

I have improved some of the translation plese read upto chapter 30 and give me your feedback

7mth
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Kamikaze_Eagle
Kamikaze_EagleLv5

Maybe start with the section saying you will improve. Capitalize your I's and *make not may.

Poke_writer:I have improved some of the translation plese read upto chapter 30 and give me your feedback
7mth
Kamikaze_Eagle
Kamikaze_EagleLv5

Oh yeah, and periods at the end of sentences.

Kamikaze_Eagle:Maybe start with the section saying you will improve. Capitalize your I's and *make not may.
7mth
ProfaneImmortal
ProfaneImmortalLv14

where is Gary's harem ??

Poke_writer:I have improved some of the translation plese read upto chapter 30 and give me your feedback
7mth
8utenjxi
8utenjxiLv1

There is still breeding instead of training.

Poke_writer:I have improved some of the translation plese read upto chapter 30 and give me your feedback
7mth
1
IA_Extra13
IA_Extra13Lv4

is it Harem?

Poke_writer:I have improved some of the translation plese read upto chapter 30 and give me your feedback
6mth
1
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Aayush_storms
Aayush_stormsLv4

Best Gary reincarnation story ever. Hope this translation gets recognition. Highly recommended to those seeing this review.

7mth

Silcoo
SilcooLv4

tf is this shit so many errors my brain hurts when reading it author don't know what is difference of breeding and training pokemon trainer and pokemon breeder are different type of shits

7mth
LordTouchMee
LordTouchMeeLv4

what's the raw or mtl of the novel and is there romance?

7mth
Satyam_Kushwah_754
Satyam_Kushwah_754Lv1

The story is very close to my childhood memories and please keep it going. I love this _____________________________________________&&____________________________________________________ ✅✅✅✅✅✅

7mth
Lucio1221
Lucio1221Lv2

Yo personalmente ya me leí todo lo que ha subido hasta ahora. Eso quiere decir antes de los cambios. Y no me molestaba para tanto. Pero es verdad que ahora es más fácil dejarse envolver en la historia. La historia es buena. El autor original no quiere interferir con Ash. Se nota y algunas veces es molesto. Piensa demasiado si capturar un pokemon qué sería de Ash y cuando lo intentó ni siquiera quedo claro si era o no. Otro tema que el sistema de sugerencias con recompensas sobre que capturar pokemones también molesta un poco. Pero en general la historia es bastante buena.

7mth
8utenjxi
8utenjxiLv1

First- Can you give raw link. Synopsis SI into Gary Oak with system. Female Lead-> Sabrina System-> give rewards for fighting imp battles like gym and important characters. He has Blue's Team and more. Pokemon: Blastoise Alkazam Tyranitar Arcanine Buterfree Zapdos Scizor Rhyperior Glaceon Eevee etc and may more Review: Its worth a read. But caution for some words: Breeding -> Training Water Flow Break -> Aquatail and some more I can't remember.

7mth
Daemon_Sultan
Daemon_SultanLv4

the story is too fast paced..............

7mth
MarinXGrayfia
MarinXGrayfiaLv4

disappointment. author just translate the raw and just post it without reading and use the correct term for example i read so far, was usually when pokemon can battle, it use "pokemon name unable to battle but this it was "pokemon name lose combated ability" and second was when pokemon win over opponent pokemon, it use defeat not killed or killing. I don't waste time reading to a book that author himself doesn't appreciate his own work, author just straight throw it in 👋👋

7mth
OSIRIS111
OSIRIS111Lv1

Reveal spoiler

7mth
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