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What? Narcissus jade bone?

Its a great story, ill recommend it but there are a few drawbacks here. 1) In starting the translation is not as good , it does get better later but after chap 400ish , the translator starts using AI as he also admitted in a review to increase word count. Its bearable till chap 500 and then it gets too blatant. 2) Dialogue is not good in this one 😕. In start , it's okay but like I said after chap 500ish , AI was used which makes the dialogue even worse 3) There are problems in consistency. Sometimes , the lvls jump around like in case of evolution of Gabite to Garchomp lvl 48 is req but Gary feeds it 2 rare candies to get it to lvl 40 and then it evolves and then it directly shows lvl 48. There are other examples too 4) if anyone's wondering abt romance. There is slight romance in the beginning with Sabrina but she later leaves to become an actor and then there is no communication b/w them. Later, the author mention her in one chapter saying that they communicated on phone and Later became distant. Till chap 540 , no other female mc is mentioned. 5) MC's personality is OK. In the begining , he is little arrogant which i can understand . But in Paldea region, in Naraja Academy , I didn't like his personality at all . Too arrogant and concieted. I have been binge reading this but I'll pause it here and pick it up later if I am bored .