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I'm not a fan of this . It feels like the story is deliberately trying to create an enemy of vishanti. It has been standard for Marvel magic users to use the power, and yet here is someone who doesn't want to pay the adequate price . It feels like a forcing situation where mc is trying to escape a good contract that fails and creates an enemy in vishanti . I really hope this is not the route this story takes, and the so-called price is actually logical to the overall story.
For a translation, this is a good read, Kudos to translator for making it readable. As for the story, I've read up to 20 chapters almost, and it has pretty much all classic mtl elements you can expect . You can divide all characters in three categories: girlfriend, bootlickers and enemies. Till now, we've encountered only bootlicker and enemies part, and judging by the direction story going ,it'd probably have girlfriends soon enough. I'll probably read it up to a few more chapters and drop it.But for other readers, if you haven't read an attribute type system stories with an op mc , go for it. It's still a better fanfic than most of the other fanfics here.
I always prefer a transmigration mc who has basic knowledge about the story rather than a religious fan of the stories.A mc who doesn't know much will tackle one trouble after another where a fan mc will go and beyond to save everyone which makes stories incredibly stale.
sheer cringe lord
borriiiinnng. This story makes it seems rose as some unbeatable character . Herpo had a thousand years and yet hadn't found a solution against six eyes ?? Doubtful. And she's basically toying with experienced fighters. I also thought this was a invasion. So where s the other invaders and why aren't they attacking?? it's getting extremely underwhelming
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what I don't understand is how the hell rose gets so strong if she's from the juggle world . She knows so much about red and blue and fighting, etc. I would have understood it if she was trained under dembledore
honestly, most people have something against him,it seems .
meh, the way it's written, it feels like nothing has changed from the original story. Especially your mc feels nothing different because of transmigration .It seems like he's just replaced the og story, except for that everything's pretty much the same
here , many people are suggesting many characters where power can get to extreme limit which im nit fan of . I'm fan of comparatively much more slower. One suggestion I would give is to stick to anime characters. Dc and marvel ar too overpowered. You gave him a katana , I saw. So give him a sword master type template e to make use of that example like unohana,byakuya or mihawk. then slowly get to other powers
guy is really playing with fire ,huh
I don't mind a harem but try to keep it small. Don't make it like catching pokemons