NoctisX54

im glad author didn't tried to force the mc with the main cast with some sort of forced plot. Otherwise wouldve ruined the story

story is dragging slightly.

overall , extremely bad story. There are many issues with 9 chapters i have read. Too many to ignore and just read on at this point. The massive constant comedic undertone of the writing style of the whole makes it simply unreadable. Like author doesn't understand the difference between comedy and whats a dumb gimmick. There's the issue with him not wanting to drag into voldemort stuff . Ok ? No one is really asking you to but the moment you get a strong spell yo8 want to fight voldemort. And the old dumbledore bashing in CN is jist getting old . "Old bumblebee" is such a massive red flag these days. And side characters have zero personality. And the guy doesn't have any friends as well. Like Hermione helped the mc so much but the moment there is a trouble with troll he just hide himself. Extremely pathetic. I'm not saying go all heroic but have the decency to ay least save your friends . Overall , extremely disappointed with this story

why do you think you have to do that honestly ? what's the actual logic behind that. Neville and seamus haven't participated any of the first five year stuff . So , honestly jist feel like unnecessary comments

whole lot of annoying exposition dump and totally made with ai . Didn't feel a single shred of human writing

these dialogue are made with ai. pretty annoying to read it

I think these are haban berries and maybe occa . I feel like i would've appreciated it whole lot if the translator put a little more effort into naming these stuffs

werewolf hair ? wtf ? werewolf can't even use magic while in transformation. also I've never heard of it .

this is not ned . New despised things like assassination and other stuffs. More than that he believed in the letter of law. So ned wouldn't approve of the guy. This story reads like someone who haven't done much character study on asoiaf lore

sounds ai ish