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Good writing and also I like the recent chapter with Rapid Infantry and their sacrifice. Please don't drop this story it has great potential.

Pros- Definitely an interesting take on lotr especially with the new elements involved it’s almost like a new world Cons-nothing really explained about the basic outline of the power system or really anything to do with ranks. very confusing at times

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It's rare to see a LOTR fanfic, specially not this good. Great work and very nice world building and although a little fast phased it's still very good.

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