😊

The idea is good , the story seems nice and promising but I can't really say that the end result is THAT good . I mean , I know that the MC is 16 years old mentally but still . He summons troops all the time , with weak excuses , there is no mention of how they look after themselves , as having a 100 (and still growing) party of knights would need a lot of supplies . And it feels like the some characters have different personalities to fit the MC

Good writing and also I like the recent chapter with Rapid Infantry and their sacrifice. Please don't drop this story it has great potential.

Thank you so much for a wonderful story. Hope you can provide an updated chapters. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

It's rare to see a LOTR fanfic, specially not this good. Great work and very nice world building and although a little fast phased it's still very good.

Reveal spoiler

Gooood x100 ……………………………………………. ……………………………………………. ……………………………………………. ……………………………………………. ……………………………………………. ……………………………………………. …………………………………………….…………………………………………….

Pros- Definitely an interesting take on lotr especially with the new elements involved it’s almost like a new world Cons-nothing really explained about the basic outline of the power system or really anything to do with ranks. very confusing at times