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TrashconsumerLv25mth
2024-11-14 15:03

Still currently at 10 chapters so i cant say much but its honestly interesting, the story is not heavily involved with getting stronger but about the mc getting to know more about the world. Though i would like to see him subjugate his shadows and make them obey him instead of skipping the whole process and be introduced with different shikigamis not from the normal jjk 10 shadows.

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I would have shown it if it was interesting, but Narauko is plenty strong just by himself so it was basically either just summon->punch or summon->decapitate with shadow blade

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