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2024-10-16 17:08

JJK is one of my favorite animes of all time just for how perfect the fights capture that shonen spirit of clashing ideals. And I am so glad one of my favorite authors is writing one. Now, on to the review. Writing Quality: Practically perfect. No redundant paragraphs. We are basically learning something new every scene, honestly. Story Development:I am caught up with all chapters on patreon as of writing this review, so the Story Development for a JJK x minor DxD crossover is crazy good so far. All we have seen of DxD, though, is the yokai and everything that basically comes with, such as lifeforce being something people can use as a power and their natural ability to use illusions but, this is a world that mostly runs on JJK rules, so Youkai have cursed energy and everything that comes with. Character Design: The author's characters, as always, are amazing. The OC's always add something cool and refreshing if you are getting bored of reading the same characters (which you won't). Bored always has a refreshing take on the already established and well written about characters, especially with always being before canon and throwing in out the window. Updating Stability: Not as good as Jester's 1k words a day but pretty good nonetheless. World Background: JJK x DxD set in Japan way in the beginning of the Heian era, I mean, Sukuna is still literally learning Jujutsu. Overall 5/5 Read it.

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THOTSLAYER
THOTSLAYERLv4

oops meant to spoiler

THOTSLAYER
THOTSLAYERLv4

Get glazed Kevin, also I am on chapter 9 on Patreon

Bored_MC
Bored_MCAuthor

<3

THOTSLAYER:Get glazed Kevin, also I am on chapter 9 on Patreon
Bored_MC
Bored_MCAuthor

I love you man, thanks for the review <3

legacy_the_last
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now that's what i call master glazing

THOTSLAYER:oops meant to spoiler
GuYueFangYuan
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Is there harem love romace family love etc like this??

Bored_MC:I love you man, thanks for the review <3
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I shit you not, this might be the best fanfic I've read on Webnovel, and easily, EASILY is one of the best fanfics I've read in general. The writing quality is a solid 9/10. I could see it being a bit better, with some spelling/word placement mistakes and a few run-on sentences, but to say it's anything less than proficient grammar would be disingenuous. World Building is a 9~10/10, with the score being interchangeable. You've managed to make a completely different yet respectable world from practically scrap loitered on a sh*t-stack called Jujutsu Kaisen(not jjk hate, just not enough world building for the heian era). My only personal gripe is the DXD crossover, at least an aspect of it. I just do not enjoy the whole 'gods' thing, and even now, I have trouble understanding exactly what the hell happened with sugawara and his ascension. Though, for the score, my personal opinion had been put aside. Character Design is, again, a solid 9/10. The descriptions you ever so seemingly amalgamate create an almost picture-esque image in my mind, and the way you let it flow naturally with the story itself is telling how much effort you've put in writing. I have no complaints here; I don't think I have the skills to even complain at all in this regard. Update Stability is probably a 10/10? At least, I'm hoping it's a 10. I don't mind waiting a month to read a chapter, given how most chapter-by-chapter novels wait that long, but I would prefer it to be sooner. Even then, a 10/10 as long as it's anywhere below a month or so. Since apparently I've kinda f*cked up the order of the list already... Story development is without a doubt, no questions asked, 10/10! Not once have I read a fanfic with such an immaculate story development. The way you could just weave a story as if you are Clotho herself is mind-boggling to me. such fluid, 𝘧𝘳𝘪𝘤𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯𝘭𝘦𝘴𝘴 storytelling is not what I would expect from actual 𝘣𝘰𝘰𝘬𝘴, let alone a FANFIC! Overall, a hard-earned, ABSOLUTELY well-deserved, 9.8/10!!!

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