webnovel
JxstASyko
JxstASykoLv154mth
2024-12-07 01:28

It’s peak And it can grow because of its setting as you have a mash of dxd and jjk. Jjk’s universe is pretty small in the manga and anime but the concepts are cool and then adding in dxd (which is really big in terms of what you can do with it) allows a lot of stuff to be done in the future if wanted Defo should read

Liked by 2 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
No_Known
No_KnownLv2

I shit you not, this might be the best fanfic I've read on Webnovel, and easily, EASILY is one of the best fanfics I've read in general. The writing quality is a solid 9/10. I could see it being a bit better, with some spelling/word placement mistakes and a few run-on sentences, but to say it's anything less than proficient grammar would be disingenuous. World Building is a 9~10/10, with the score being interchangeable. You've managed to make a completely different yet respectable world from practically scrap loitered on a sh*t-stack called Jujutsu Kaisen(not jjk hate, just not enough world building for the heian era). My only personal gripe is the DXD crossover, at least an aspect of it. I just do not enjoy the whole 'gods' thing, and even now, I have trouble understanding exactly what the hell happened with sugawara and his ascension. Though, for the score, my personal opinion had been put aside. Character Design is, again, a solid 9/10. The descriptions you ever so seemingly amalgamate create an almost picture-esque image in my mind, and the way you let it flow naturally with the story itself is telling how much effort you've put in writing. I have no complaints here; I don't think I have the skills to even complain at all in this regard. Update Stability is probably a 10/10? At least, I'm hoping it's a 10. I don't mind waiting a month to read a chapter, given how most chapter-by-chapter novels wait that long, but I would prefer it to be sooner. Even then, a 10/10 as long as it's anywhere below a month or so. Since apparently I've kinda f*cked up the order of the list already... Story development is without a doubt, no questions asked, 10/10! Not once have I read a fanfic with such an immaculate story development. The way you could just weave a story as if you are Clotho herself is mind-boggling to me. such fluid, 𝘧𝘳𝘪𝘤𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯𝘭𝘦𝘴𝘴 storytelling is not what I would expect from actual 𝘣𝘰𝘰𝘬𝘴, let alone a FANFIC! Overall, a hard-earned, ABSOLUTELY well-deserved, 9.8/10!!!

Related Stories