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2024-09-19 00:12

The story seems good but the inconsistency with the pronouns suck, one moment it’s ‘he’ then the next paragraph it’s a ‘she’

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MERCPHOBIA00019
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MERCPHOBIA00019
MERCPHOBIA00019Author

This is a Chinese fanfic novel that I translated and posted here. It is true that it has many problems but it is fun

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Dao_of_bonks
Dao_of_bonksLv4

Yeah the pronoun the word refer to him/male is 他 and the pronoun of female/girl/her/she is 她 and I get that the translation got confuse on that part [img=faceslap]

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AmiOnigase
AmiOnigaseLv4

The pronouns and characters name is so inconsistent even in the same paragraph.. I think translator just chuck the original fic to MTL machine and post it without even second glance to read or make some improvements of the work that they 'translate'..

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Blood_soaked_bar
Blood_soaked_barLv11

Hey mate a simple question is the protagonist going to have a sequence or not?

MERCPHOBIA00019:This is a Chinese fanfic novel that I translated and posted here. It is true that it has many problems but it is fun
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MERCPHOBIA00019
MERCPHOBIA00019Author

yes it has

Blood_soaked_bar: Hey mate a simple question is the protagonist going to have a sequence or not?
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Blood_soaked_bar
Blood_soaked_barLv11

Thanks

MERCPHOBIA00019:yes it has
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The pronouns and characters name is so inconsistent even in the same paragraph.. I think translator just chuck the original fic to MTL machine and post it without even second glance to read or make some improvements of the work that they 'translate'..

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