The_WheelOfFortune

The novel started off good but now it’s just forced plot/romance and the mc’s IQ dropped by a large amount

I’m glad that I didn’t drop this fanfic because it’s fucking amazing

This shit is INSANELY wierd the mc was a femboy in his past life and he’s terrified of women. Not the best start but I’ll read until chapter 15 to see where this is going.

The story is really good and interesting, but I hope the mc becomes less cowardly and annoying.

This story is actually good for an mtl, there’s some small inconsistencies with the Text (calling proto saber a her) and there’s also some really weird parts.

The fic is very interesting and good but I don’t really like how he revealed EVERYTHING to the gov’t (flaw, aspect, etc) but I’ll trust that you know what your doing.

The translation if very poor including the formating but it’s an interesting idea.

It’s an interesting read but there are some flaws/errors in it, for example it keeps referring to the ancient one as a ‘he’

I really like this concept idea I read a few chapters and I really liked it

The story seems good but the inconsistency with the pronouns suck, one moment it’s ‘he’ then the next paragraph it’s a ‘she’