The_WheelOfFortune

I really like this fic, can’t wait for more chapters. The concept is really interesting and I think the execution was done great.

I really like the concept and the stor, but one thing that really irks me is the naming because one moment its a great jagras but the next its called a great jaggi, or one moment its a Machoke and then its being called a machamp, other that that its a really great fic.

This fic has good potential but the plot is super forced, it ruins any enjoyment while reading it.

Great concept and good story, but there are some inconsistencies.

The story is good but the mc is very annoying

+1

I like the concept and overall theme of the story but the grammar isn’t the best.

I have fallen in love with this fic, we need more.

I like the book but their are a lot of spelling mistakes

The story is good and interesting but there are noticeable errors in the grammar.