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2024-09-30 01:21

Writing quality is great but the plot is horrible together with the mc. The mc is an emotionless doll, youll understand once you read past 40 chapters. And the once thought female lead also dies for plot convenience. Iay be ranting but this is my review, no one wants to see something so tragic from a somewhat happy fantasy fan fic. Dropped this.

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FanHarem
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I did tag tragedy beforehand but its a valid review as any other. Gonna pin this. Also, I'd like to explain for anyone following this review thread that MC isn't emotionless but refuses to willingly be dependent on anothers's existence for emotional support and companionship because it always hurt when you lose them. It was outright stated for his lack of interest in mortals without Gu cultivation and does extend further to others

Big_D_Buster
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when's next update

FanHarem:I did tag tragedy beforehand but its a valid review as any other. Gonna pin this. Also, I'd like to explain for anyone following this review thread that MC isn't emotionless but refuses to willingly be dependent on anothers's existence for emotional support and companionship because it always hurt when you lose them. It was outright stated for his lack of interest in mortals without Gu cultivation and does extend further to others
FanHarem
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in a few hours

Big_D_Buster:when's next update
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