Writing quality is great but the plot is horrible together with the mc.
The mc is an emotionless doll, youll understand once you read past 40 chapters.
And the once thought female lead also dies for plot convenience.
Iay be ranting but this is my review, no one wants to see something so tragic from a somewhat happy fantasy fan fic.
Dropped this.
I did tag tragedy beforehand but its a valid review as any other. Gonna pin this. Also, I'd like to explain for anyone following this review thread that MC isn't emotionless but refuses to willingly be dependent on anothers's existence for emotional support and companionship because it always hurt when you lose them. It was outright stated for his lack of interest in mortals without Gu cultivation and does extend further to others
Big_D_BusterLv3
when's next update
FanHarem:I did tag tragedy beforehand but its a valid review as any other. Gonna pin this. Also, I'd like to explain for anyone following this review thread that MC isn't emotionless but refuses to willingly be dependent on anothers's existence for emotional support and companionship because it always hurt when you lose them. It was outright stated for his lack of interest in mortals without Gu cultivation and does extend further to others
FanHaremAuthor
in a few hours
Big_D_Buster:when's next update
dankokuLv4
I read through this 10/10 fanfic and decided, you have no reading comprehension. The MC is in NO WAY an emotionless doll, all I see is that he has never placed his genuine trust and feelings on another person and is unwilling to do so, he also does show loads of emotions when it comes to 'that' department.
CallmeCyrus0409Lv4
Lol, meaning he is apathetic as hell. The heck you talking about.
dankoku:I read through this 10/10 fanfic and decided, you have no reading comprehension. The MC is in NO WAY an emotionless doll, all I see is that he has never placed his genuine trust and feelings on another person and is unwilling to do so, he also does show loads of emotions when it comes to 'that' department.
dankokuLv4
Have you read through reverend insanity or not? If you have then how? Considering that fang yuan is the most extreme example of that. MC himself felt bad over 'her' death but just not for long, he didn't love her but valued her, as he mentioned before.
CallmeCyrus0409:Lol, meaning he is apathetic as hell. The heck you talking about.
dankokuLv4
Incase you didn't read through reverend insanity, FY was subjected to 3 lifetimes of love and all that, but he and his goal didn't waver at all, breaking through them.
CallmeCyrus0409:Lol, meaning he is apathetic as hell. The heck you talking about.
CallmeCyrus0409Lv4
Sure, whatever let's you sleep at night.
FangYuan1234Lv3
Honestly having a logical emotionless doll hell bent on his goal as a protag is the Hallmark of RI so I don't really see the problem there
absolueLv13
Hi author, I would like to know if there is ntr and yuri in it? I hate it
FanHarem:I did tag tragedy beforehand but its a valid review as any other. Gonna pin this. Also, I'd like to explain for anyone following this review thread that MC isn't emotionless but refuses to willingly be dependent on anothers's existence for emotional support and companionship because it always hurt when you lose them. It was outright stated for his lack of interest in mortals without Gu cultivation and does extend further to others