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2024-09-17 12:56

I only read the first 5 chapters but honestly one of the best RI reads for me Good work 👍👍

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I don't know why I waited so long to review this novel when it's so peak but here I finally go. First writing quality, the writing is great, little to no grammar or spelling mistakes. The story really does hold the same poeticness of the og RI and the main character has his poetic lines(mainly Rizzing people but with the title of the novel what do expect). Simple and easy 5 stars. Story development, it has great plot with unique turns and twist added to the original plot. The story is great mix of seriousness, humor, and romance without ruining all three general tones. There is also little to no plot holes that would ruin immersion especially for those who are die hard fans of the original. The plot flows nice, there is never a time were I want to skip a section(or do that thing where you look at the next couple chapter names to get hyped especially through a boring part, but I don't know if thats just me)or think an arc is dragging too long or the opposite were I think an arc was too short or not explored enough. Plot almost never feels forced(if you think anything is seemingly forced, must be heavens will). Another easy 5 stars. Character development, I might not do the character justice but trust me, the author cooked with a main character that isn't some edge lord, horn dog, idiot, or any other annoying character flaws that can seriously hurt a novel. The main character truly does live up to the novels title, he is the rizzlord, rizziah(rizz messiah), rizzking, rizzhero, rizzemperor, etc. His romance with characters doesn't feel forced or more common something boring that doesn't flow into the novel but seems like an afterthough and than an addition to the story. The author obviously knows what he is doing. The mc is not naive but also neither is he faultless and unrelatable, he is not great guy but it's RI, those don't exist. Overall, for this novel and plot being used, 10/5 character. Updating stability, this one is subjective on what you want or more than often used when people review(especially webnovel), feel entitled to. The author doesn't dump out 3 to 4 chapters a week or one every day, it's more of a weekly basis with some quicker or longer releases. While taking a longer time to update than the top fanfics, it makes up for it in the fact that the chapters are always around 2 to 3 times the length of normal fanfic chapter. The reason why I am giving it five stars on stability is because I am using my own metric and so I personally have never felt that a novels update stability should ever affect thier review, nobody judges real books by how long it took to publish or make a new book in the series, it's about the plot, character, and story. As long as the author is pumping atleast something out once in awhile, the stability is always 5 stars for me. So I will reiterate again, 5 stars. World background, this will be the simplest of them. It is reverend insanity, a complex and big world that has already been thoroughly explained and shown by the original author and in using this in a fanfic makes a pretty simple 5 stars. Additionally even if you haven't read RI you, the author of this fanfic has the world explained enough for you too catch on and not be clueless or feel like you need to do your research to understand something. So overall 5 stars for world background. Overall review rating, definite 5/5. Additionally stuff: First, while not everyone is willing or capable, which includes me, there is a patreon that has 60 MORE chapters of this novel, as of writing this novel that basically doubles the story if you choose to buy it. So if you do get addicted, you got plenty more to read. Second, a trait that is pretty rare but common on all great fanfics here(which is a telling sign of this fanfics quality) an author who actively communicates and interacts with the community they have cultivated. The author will almost always like every single comment one every paragraph within the first few hours and almost always answer questions readers have or address problems, or even tell people when something has come up in thier personal life that has caused them to not post. No one is abliged to do that but you won't be suddenly ghosted and afraid of the author suddenly dropping the story with this author. Then third and last of all to finish this review is the community is also great, while not big it is very positive and not annoying. It is similar to the Nah I'd adapt community, if it wasn't as wild or as big but still just a good time and great atmosphere(which honestly can affect reading a novel when all the comments are hating or debating). Author thanks for writing something so genuinely enjoyable to read and interact with. 👍 also here a random pick from my gallery I guess 🤷‍♂️

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