Whenever there is Yuri I'll be there! Please don't drop.

This story is interesting I hope you don’t drop it 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

It’s a good, wry good idea of a story. There’s a huge plot hole in the first chapter to the 3rd chapter. She wakes up and doesn’t understand why she’s in a new body(female snap) only to contradict that by saying she planned it all out with the ‘company’. She then goes for a 4th magic system when she already has 3 to use. She has Roy mustang’s template, also another persons who I don’t know(somthing to do with metals), and Harry Potter magic(snaps template) she then goes for a magic girl magic system. She also planes to steal from the ‘company’ by getting a new character template each week and putting all the memories in a metal(metal magic thing) this is such a broken thing that it would probably ruin the story but thankfull the ‘company’ read her mind and said no and there would be consequences if she does this, and so they compensate her with the full power of the magic girl magic system right off the bat. This just completely ruins that aspect as well, why go for another magic system in the first place then. I also asked if the aurther could explain this ‘company’ so we can understand what it can or can’t do. I would also suggest to breaking the really long paragraph up, it takes up my full screen and I have to scroll a bit to get to the end of the paragraph. Other than that, it is aurthers first book so its pretty good.

really loving this story can't wait to see how she effects the hp world and other worlds also hope the author like so many others doesn't drop of the face of the earth never to be heard from again

I really love Harry Potter fics, but this one have something special. The more i read , the more i want to read . That’s a really good work.

it's a really well written story, with an interesting power set. I'm really interested in seeing how it'll go further down the line, can't wait to see what the author is cooking up. please don't drop it's a really interesting story

I find it very amusing and interesting.To listen to

I was actually really enjoying the story despite the author inability to use the correct pronouns and prefixes until around chapter 40 where they made the mc reveal all her abilities and her system to someone who had tried to kill her multiple times honestly was really disappointing and I saw a lot of other reader express their own disapproval in the comments to witch the author never responded in any way

great story, at the start it might be a bit confusing with the powers and how they are used, if you can make it pass that small part you find a diamond.

really loving this story so far, can't wait to see how it progresses. Can't wait to see the other worlds. Will definitely continue reading it. Please don't drop.