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nameless_blade
nameless_bladeLv52mth
2024-10-19 03:42

well this novel has its unique take on harry potter , but I am sure its written by an stupid oldman who just keep yapping everything and anything.

Harry Potter: Toji Potter

WRizz1
3.5
102 Chs

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WRizz1
WRizz1Author

Quite the sharp tongue you have there, why bother write a review like that if you yourself are incapable of doing it better? Words can be hurtful and while I myself am unbothered by your crude comment, This might not be like that with others. Leave constructive criticism behind, not insults.

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Jaded_Penny
Jaded_PennyLv12

True... Just telling what you don't like in the story should be enough, no need to be so rude and tactless, just because you can...

WRizz1:Quite the sharp tongue you have there, why bother write a review like that if you yourself are incapable of doing it better? Words can be hurtful and while I myself am unbothered by your crude comment, This might not be like that with others. Leave constructive criticism behind, not insults.
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Jay0Kay
Jay0KayLv4

The entire story feels rushed and practically screams ai generated

3mth

JaxWolf4
JaxWolf4Lv4

Toji spotted.

3mth
WRizz1
WRizz1Author

Hope you enjoy this and comment, drop Stones and review. It doesn’t take too much time 😁

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Danule
DanuleLv15

ok so I have thoughts. first this is your story you do you. having said that a couple things stand out. one is that there is no detail on the how or why of the matter, just he "did it". I've only got to chapter ten and can see several loopholes. first, how did he get to the leaky cauldron, how did he get the respect of the goblins, how did he immediately identify Daphne. so on and so fourth. there is no how. on the other hand. the actions of the background charaters make no sense. like at all. not at any point have I seen a reaction beyond " OMG HE AMAZING". not that that can't happen but it goes back to WHY. what is the thought process of them making there, kinda ridiculous, choices. I think the premise of the story as huge potential. but needs more thought put into it. I think you can make a real entertaining story with a little more time and practice.

1mth
zahra_kianpour
zahra_kianpourLv3

So coollllll 🥰😍😌😌😉😍🥰😘😘😍🙃🙂😊☺️☺️😊🙂🙂😇😊😊☺️☺️💕💗💗💗🙏🏻 Please update don’t stop ✋ . . . . . . Gh❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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robert_wylie
robert_wylieLv1

it reads like a mix between a ff .net novel and AI generated. harry potter goes to Gringotts, gets his heritage tested (and gets multiple lordships of course)and horcrux removed, all things you see a million times on ff .net. acts like a young master and hates dumbledore. again, it just reads like a weirdly written bashing fic. if you know you know.

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FluffyPanda44
FluffyPanda44Lv4

Just your average OP reincarnate fanfic with confusing story developments. It also seems like it’s also a harem.

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AlexPendragon
AlexPendragonLv1

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DaddyCarvz
DaddyCarvzLv4

So I reach till Dumbledore versus Voldemort. I am waiting to have at least 50 more chapters so I can binge read again like what I did with the One Piece one. Again it's not perfect but for someone just starting and actually doing this for free, author is doing great. There are some parts of inconsistency. A lot of earlier ideas of MC on what to do got forgotten then on latter parts brought out like it was the first time. But overall salute to author. Keep it up and I'm waiting for more

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