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I haven't planned that far yet, so it's a maybe.
I do understand, but the problems weren’t as big and so the Grand Priest was able to solve them mostly, so that Caelix would get his chance to train.
The trio has a very strong bond and their training along with their communication with each other makes it so their closeness is just right, or at least I believe so, however it is helpful to read how others see it, thanks for your comment.
*Please do read on.*
Yeah, I know that my MC is sort of like a Gary Stu, But do keep in mind that this is one of my first works, don't judge me too hard for it, plus you're very early in the Story.
Sorry for writing it that way. I just had the idea that a relationship should start blossoming here, though I do see that Toji is acting a bit like a creep. Thank you for the comment, and I hope you enjoy the story as it goes on.
Correct, He did in fact never see him that small.
Hello Adriana7885, Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts. I appreciate your feedback and understand that the initial chapters might have given the impression of a typical harem fanfic. However, I want to assure you that there's much more depth and complexity to the story beyond the first few chapters. The relationships and character development are integral parts of the plot, but they don't define the entire narrative. I hope you'll consider reading further to see the broader themes and plotlines unfold. Your insights are valuable, and I'm always looking to improve. Best regards, Author
Yeah, the staff doesn't play too much of a role in this story anyway, I kinda tried it and then I sort of dropped it, just enjoy the read and hope you had a nice 2024, because 2025 will be better.
Thanks a bunch man, your words warm my heart.