Item: Dominion of The Beast Masters
Rating: 2.8
Author: Tico05

Tico05Lv102mth

2024-11-15 06:35

Honestly dropped this on the first chapter, i think we should first follow the mc and some of the other characters for a while before betrayals start to happen, I don't really know anything about these characthers to feel invested in the betrayals and the way the mc reacted didn't feel very realistic to me given the info we had (which wasn't a lot to be fair, first chapter and all), but the story felt like it was going to be very revenge driven, if that's your type of story give it a shot.

Dominion of The Beast Masters

Yalatola

4.7

296 Chs

Liked it!

Replies4

YalatolaAuthor

I'm hesitating with how to answer that. the simple way: you've read one chapter, everything you think about the book is false and from what you said, literally the opposite. it would take you to read 4 chapters to have a better understanding. tired answer: this is the second time I'm saying it today but if you want to understand a book, read it. Reviewing is for if you have at least some bases of the story but if your view is based on a false impression then it becomes misinformation. You didn't understand the reactions in chapter 1? make sense, it's indeed chapter 1. I'm the kind of author who develop the story with showing thoroughly the behavior and motivations of the characters through many chapters instead of saying X is bad and jealous in chapter 1.

2mth

YalatolaAuthor

I believe in your good intention so I won't delete the review and let it here for a while hoping you'll write another one, you can even give 1 star, but at least with a real analysis of the story. let me know if you plan to try

2mth

Tico05Lv10

thanks for the responses, I'll read on and redo my review at some later point, meanwhile if you honestly believe what i wrote to be false you can delete it I'm ok with that

Yalatola:I believe in your good intention so I won't delete the review and let it here for a while hoping you'll write another one, you can even give 1 star, but at least with a real analysis of the story. let me know if you plan to try

2mth

YalatolaAuthor

It's ok, now I trust you so I'll let it here. take your time

Tico05:thanks for the responses, I'll read on and redo my review at some later point, meanwhile if you honestly believe what i wrote to be false you can delete it I'm ok with that

2mth

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YalatolaAuthor

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FrantisixLv15

Everything seems very forced within the story. Read 20 chapters to get a feel for it and I personally think a longer “prologue” to the betrayal is much needed. Main character is supposed to be the top of the first years and a genius but no one listens to his side of the story which is very weird and feels too forced without more context. Maybe a few chapters of the Academy characters interacting before hand could sell it better but even the parents not listening ,after giving their all to send him to that Academy, just feels horribly forced. Then he’s accepted no problem at all within the aunt’s household… either way more worldbuilding and fleshing out of every character’s motive is really needed. POV switching is prevalent within the story as well but personally, I think it should be handled differently by making dedicated chapters or a cleaner text break within the chapter instead of just the next paragraph.

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