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Everything seems very forced within the story. Read 20 chapters to get a feel for it and I personally think a longer “prologue” to the betrayal is much needed. Main character is supposed to be the top of the first years and a genius but no one listens to his side of the story which is very weird and feels too forced without more context. Maybe a few chapters of the Academy characters interacting before hand could sell it better but even the parents not listening ,after giving their all to send him to that Academy, just feels horribly forced. Then he’s accepted no problem at all within the aunt’s household… either way more worldbuilding and fleshing out of every character’s motive is really needed. POV switching is prevalent within the story as well but personally, I think it should be handled differently by making dedicated chapters or a cleaner text break within the chapter instead of just the next paragraph.

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This is a masterpiece. The only thing to complain about would be the occasional spelling or grammatical errors, but even that does not take away from the quality of the story. The author does a great job of capturing your attention from the first couple of chapters and keeping your attention with their almost magical ability to pace the story perfectly. I almost never take the time to write a review, but this one deserved the time. Highly recommend.

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Okie brutally honest review, aimed at people thinking about reading this book. The GOOD STUFF: The writing is good, small errors;however, it’s well written from a technical standpoint. The MC and most the characters are all pretty amazing. The antagonist is a little over the top annoying (young master type shit), but not as bad as some novels. The relationships are incredibly well written. Feom friendship, family and romance it’s all well done. Honestly this is probably the highlight of the book. The world building is so so. We really don’t know what the world is like, only the individual cities we find ourselves in. However, that’s not necessarily a bad thing. Sometimes authors create this huge world, but don’t give visual references and it’s impossible to sort out which countries are where etc…. The BAD stuff: Honestly not much to criticize here, and most of it can be skipped by skipping chapters. The most overwhelming negative to this novel are the fight scenes. Absolute cringe dog shit in my opinion. I honestly started just skipping them because they’re so terrible to read. Though some people might like the fighting style. The fighting style is the stereotypical anime, mc is losing powers up and wins type. (Well the important fights). We are talking 5 chapters in one fight scene. Like fuck bro. Both characters holding back, then using a “trump card”. Then holding back and using another. Multiple times in every fight scene. When you’re reading a fight and both characters “aura explodes even stronger” 4-7 times in one fight it just lacks creativity. And honestly that’s the only issue this novel had. Let’s be real. In real fights that matter people fight hard. If the MC wasn’t against absolute brain rot retards he’d have lost every fight, and vice versa. In a real fight people fight hard from the beginning. “Just warming up?” Give me a break, that’s what people do before a fight starts. So yea cringe. If the fight scenes weren’t dumb I’d rate it 5/5. Other small isssue I’d say is the overuse of face slapping when it comes to the academy people. Like once or twice is one thing, but when it consumes 80+ chapters once again kind of an issue with creativity as far as providing conflict within the plot. CLOSING: I recommend you read the novel. Honestly great read. Good characters, and absolutely wonderful relationships. And if you ignore the hella chuni fight scenes the novel is one of the best on the platform.

I was a little apprehensive at first due to the dumping of events without explanation, but the story caught me more and more in several aspects, the friendships are very well made and each character developed has their dreams whether they come true or not, they are all described, friends and enemies are demonstrated with a depth of information which leaves you with no doubts about the character, wonderful development in the romance and in the family, aspects that are often left aside as the story progresses but near the end everything fits together and everything is done in a way that leaves no gaps of forgetfulness, the only bad point for me was the rushed ending, thanks for reading.

For real did i just read " The End" , that came out of nowhere , i was really enjoying the novel