Tico05

thanks for the responses, I'll read on and redo my review at some later point, meanwhile if you honestly believe what i wrote to be false you can delete it I'm ok with that

Honestly dropped this on the first chapter, i think we should first follow the mc and some of the other characters for a while before betrayals start to happen, I don't really know anything about these characthers to feel invested in the betrayals and the way the mc reacted didn't feel very realistic to me given the info we had (which wasn't a lot to be fair, first chapter and all), but the story felt like it was going to be very revenge driven, if that's your type of story give it a shot.